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TruGemini (Chapter 33) - Fri 27 Nov 2009

So, she needed to face her pain and find herself in order to deal with everything. I like how you wrote it out, having her wander and do what was needed to get right with herself. It's sad this story is ending, but this is one of those great ones to read repeatedly.


1CarinoInu (Chapter 31) - Tue 03 Nov 2009

Okay, you've left us hanging a while, now.....pleeeeeease update!


QueenofdaTigers (Chapter 12) - Fri 23 Oct 2009

OH MY GOD!!! I loved your story since the first chapter and haven't stopped reading since. But now I have to because I'm tired. This story is so captivating. You read a couple of the chapter and then you're like, I'm going to bed. Then, you continue reading. This story is going to be the first one I read tomorrow!!!!


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 31) - Thu 15 Oct 2009

wow, wow, wow, It was a big surprise that Toga was storm.  good job and update soon...


Walter205 (Chapter 31) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

 Ooh a very nice update to wrap up what has all around been a very impressive story with originality I haven't seen in quite some kind. There were quite a few suprises in store that I hadn't seen coming and wouldn't have expected. I am awaiting with baited breath the epilogue to the story. =D


MoMo (Chapter 31) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

Hello There. I am a hermit....Ok thats a lie, but I read tremendous amounts of fanfiction. Im going on 8 years...anyway...

I just wanted to tell you your plot line Is well thought out. I never saw that storm twist which is quite nice. Ive read plenty of Kagome and Sesshoumaru pairing fanfictions, not many have story lines in which the relationship develops during the quest for naraku. Or the other characters can watch their progression as a couple. I have two question though. I don't mean to sound like a perv or anything but is there going to be any lemons between them. Obviously there cant be one at their current level of relationship. Will it be in the epilogue? Oh I think you should know you could have a sequel on your hands. Start out where this one finishes and Kagome and Sesshoumaru's progression towards the lemon (not to sound like a perv) but um anyway. I really love your work so please continue writing.


NightQueen (Chapter 31) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

Okay you made me cry! Emotional fun all the way around!!! I love that Shippo and Rin were able to see and talk to their parents one last time.  You tied up many loose ends nicely.  I have to tell you that Storm was one of my favorite characters and I rather like that he turned out to be Inu Tashio.  I think it was Kagome's and Storm's parting that made me cry the most.  He saw her through the worst of the pain and loved her like a daughter.  I hope that Sesshoumaru and Kagome live a long happy life together.  Thank you for writing such a great story! I look forward to reading more from you in the future.


autumngold (Chapter 31) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

You are amazing!  I love this chapter!  In no Taisho is Storm?  That's just perfect.  I never would have thought of it, but it makes sense.  Who better to watch over, and take care of Kagome than Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha's father.  Thank you for the update.  I can't wait for the epilogue.  I've really enjoyed reading this story!  You should be very proud of it!


TruGemini (Chapter 31) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

What an emotional chapter! Inu no Taisho as Storm was quite a surprise. I would have guessed her Father. Great job on this chapter and the story.


1CarinoInu (Chapter 31) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

This was highly emotional and very well portrayed.  I look forward to the ending, but sorry to hear that it's coming to an end.  Boo hoo!


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 15) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

hey, good chapter...I was crying at the end of the chapter about what Kagome went through...

good job and update soon...


stars (Chapter 31) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

this is great maybe u can make another story after this one. Maybe about the life they have and the trails that they would face with her saving the world.


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 12) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

Hi,

I like this story.  It iw well done and I really like how you protray kagome in all this.  it is true on how she feels aboout all this.

good job and update soon...


autumngold (Chapter 30) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

Thank you so much for this story!  I'm sad that Storm has gone.  Does Kagome have to be heartbroken to see him again?  I'm glad, however, that Naraku is gone.  Kanna's vision was scary though, will that be covered in your epilogue?  I'm hoping that Kagome and Sesshoumaru will be happy together.  Please post more soon!  I'm sad this story is almost over, but I can't wait to read your epilogue!


TruGemini (Chapter 30) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

Great final battle! for everyone to be reunited and Naraku defeated as he was. I loved it! Great job! Now to finish living through time and start posting your other stories, ne?


lady_myth (Chapter 29) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

*sputters*

gg...eb...be...g.g.grr...I...well...

 

DANGNABIT!

 

I finally get to read your story....thanks to Sugar0o's prompting and such. And I get through Chapter 28...and it ends with a CLIFFIE!

 

Grr.

Rawr.

And all of that inbetween.

 

Awesome stuff, Quiet Whisper. Keep up the good work...and power upload those chapters!!!!


NightQueen (Chapter 29) - Mon 12 Oct 2009

Absolutely love it!!  There was a minute a few chapters ago that had me nervous, but I should have realized you wouldn't leave me hanging in despair!!  I love the ring and the kiss in the middle of battle! I think Sesshoumaru's timing is perfect! She has something to fight for, something to protect!  Love this story!


oldestmaiden (Chapter 29) - Mon 12 Oct 2009

I've really enjoyed this so far. It is a refreshing and original work. Despite what you made Kagome go through to be stronger. Plus I believe that Sessharmaru is protrayed in a way I find believeable sigh...if I was only lots of years younger and he was real...oh well, lets face it, I still wouldn't have a chance if he was tired to the bedpost in magic chains,


stars (Chapter 29) - Mon 12 Oct 2009

please updata


autumngold (Chapter 29) - Mon 12 Oct 2009

I guess it's good that you brought Inuyasha back.  I'm sorry I was so mean before by not being sad about his death.  As long as he doesn't think this means he has another chance with Kagome.  I don't blame Kagome for thinking Sesshoumaru's timing was bad, but she has to realize that this might be the only chance he has to tell her how he feels.  Now, Naraku just needs to die!  There has to be a way for Kagome to get a hand on the jewel.  What is Kagura's plans for Naraku's heart?  Thank you so much for all of your updates!  I hope you're still remembering to sleep and eat! :)


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