Gah! Perfect! I doubt I've left a review yet but I've been reading since chapter one (and before?) and I love it. The slow progression of their relationship is captured in these wonderful little moments. I'm really in awe of your characterizations. I don't know what else to say other than pure poetry! I hope you have big plans for after this fic (only two more chapters?!).
this is fabulous I love it and as for simpathy weight *pouts* I'm six months along with baby number four and the hubby eats like a horse and STILL hasnt gained an ounce ,maybe it from sending him for three am cravings for curly fries with nacho cheese sauce or waffle with fried chicken ( your welcome to ask anything about pregnancy btw I think after four I've pretty much gotten it down by now lmao ) I look forward to more from this story
LOL! Great Chapter! And I want to see Sesshomaru gain some sympathy weight!
Thankyou so much for not immediately plunging them into a passionate romance. There is no better way to spoil such a wonderful plot than to hurry the characters into a relationship. This slow progression and realisation of their feelings is so much more satisfying. I really loved this chapter and Sesshoumaru's recognition of the vibrancy Kagome can bring to his life and home. Hopefully we'll get to see Kagome's POV next?
| Loved their touching moment and how they are really beginning to become husband and wife. Can't wait till next chapter.
| I love this story, but I have always loved your stories. This one and your other two that you are working on are in my opinion the best out of you yet. Keep up the good work, dear.
malom (Chapter 6) - Sun 13 Sep 2009
| I adore this story, but I adore this chapter even more. Just the right amount of fluff, a dose sweet enough to be savored yet not enough to cause toothache. It really shows their level of comfort with each other and their growing affections. I especially love the imagery of their little bedtime talk.
REDWOLF (Chapter 5) - Sat 29 Aug 2009
| Well I think Sesshoumaru is more than regretting marring the HUMAN Kagome, it seems he doesn't want children with her. Sad. I hope he can fall in love with her or at least act like it! Got a great story going here, it really makes the reader think about the characters!
GG (Chapter 5) - Fri 28 Aug 2009
| oh yay!
this was a great chapter!
i loved it
keep up the good work!
| Beautiful story love the concept, wonderful chapter.
Shurin (Chapter 5) - Thu 27 Aug 2009
| This..this is interesting. I like how you play it out between the two of them. At first I was thinking Sesshomaru would be like he is in many other fics I have read, cruel and sadistic, but I was pleasantly surprised with this one. I cant wait to read the next chapter
| So she has finally accepted her role? Is more trouble coming? What happened with Rin, and with Inuyasha? Loving this story still!
loveless (Chapter 5) - Thu 27 Aug 2009
| Yay! Another chapter. Sesshomaru was stupid for fighting their marriage. Thank God Kagome set him straight. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope there is going to be jucie sex it. Please update soon.
malom (Chapter 5) - Thu 27 Aug 2009
| I held my breath for a moment there thinking that the two of them was about to end before they even began. Ah, the honey sweet promise of the ending. I commend the characterization of Kagome. I like how her emotional strength was subtly reflected in her counter-argument of Sesshomaru's misguided benevolence.
Enchanting_Breeze (Chapter 4) - Fri 12 Jun 2009
Loved it! Your updates always brighten my day. Thank you!
| Wow! It's a rarity indeed to see Sess shaken and you have captured that well. Please keep up the great work.
Rikayu (Chapter 4) - Tue 02 Jun 2009
| Miss RosieB! That was fantastic!
Your characterizations are very believable and I could imagine the interaction between husband and wife convincing. :)
Keep up the good work! I'll be patiently waiting for your next update!
Junella (Chapter 4) - Tue 02 Jun 2009
| *sighs in sheer envy* i'd like to think that some day, I can write like you do. Lovely story you have, I'm looking forward to the remaining five parts :) Keep it up XD
| This is so interesting, different... mature.
| I love this story. The rain really set the atmosphere in the previous chapter. The "warning" at the beginning of this chapter made me smile. It reminded me of the way they used to do weather predictions for the upcoming day. Rain, early. fair to sunny mid-day. Character death, angst. Fluff later on. Melancholy to sweet by afternoon.
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