That really made my night...LOL! You have no idea how long I've waited for someone to do that to Jaken... I can also picture Sesshou in his dog form looking green around the gills... Thanks for a good chuckle... :P
I thank you for the first vore fanfiction on this site. I know that if I were him I would have taken out jaken in a similar way... along with kagome. It's just too bad that he had to spit him out, I bet that was more revolting than swallowing him in the first place!
twiknham (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Feb 2009
Poor Jaken. How could you!?! Seriously, this was a fun read. Thanks Smittee. -TK
LC Rose (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Feb 2009
HA! HA! HA! That was awesome, Smittee!! And I loved how eating Jaken made Sesshoumaru sick to the tummy and how Jaken still managed to insult her in the end. Go Jaken!! :-)
MontiK (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Feb 2009
LMAO! Eww Sesshoumaru! It's good he spit that little imp out. Never know where he's been! Good job Smittee, it gives the Monti giggles :P
MontiK
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