"She hadn’t thought, they hadn’t thought, they’d end up together but something seemed to happen to them in the time he befriended her. She trusted him. Maybe it was because he hadn’t taken advantage of her as he could have. Maybe it was because having allowed him to bind her during the act of sex she was able to draw a closer understanding of her own faults. It could have been anything and really she didn’t much care about the whys anymore. All that mattered to her were the hows. And the most important was how he made her feel."
She didn't really ALLOW him to tie her up. He drugged her, tied her up, and forced her to respond to him. You even refer to this as her "reeducation".
If the premise was Kagome struggling with her feelings and going in to see Sesshomaru, signing up for the treatment, then it would be a hot story. This is well-written, for sure, but it's blatant rape and really should have a warning past "Feminists, don't get too bothered okay?".
My second favorite in the collection. I do hope that we get to see more of this budding relationship!
Loved this one as well! Not a lot of people take the other angle and put the Dog General in an unfavorable light. I love seeing him act differently and how Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's character develop as a result!
This one was truely one of my favorites! So unique! Love the origional plot line!
Just Wonderful!
Awesome! Absoultely loved it!
etern (Chapter 3) - Tue 17 Oct 2017
Awww, I really liked the rendition of the Miko as the center of court and her consort. I’m assuming this is also loosley based off of the black jewels trilogy b6 Anne bishop! I like how u comb8ned the two concepts!
Howdy (Chapter 15) - Sun 10 Sep 2017
You are a very talented writer, and your stories are enjoyable to read. There seems to be a consistent theme with Sesshomaru finding Kagome unnattractive and Kagome being very docile. Sometimes that is explained, but sometimes it just contradicts itself. Kagome pondering why she put up with Sesshomaru claiming her but still sleeping around on her, but then telling him that her thoughts of him in high school were nothing but good. I know in cannon, Sesshomaru has a dislike for humans and he's very cold but he's very unpleasant in a lot of the stories that seem to be shooting for romantic or quirky instead of angst.
marisel (Chapter 19) - Tue 14 Jul 2015
i reallu enjoy these snort stories. great job you shold continue withvthis type of writting. well done
Lol!! I really loved and admired your story and your creativity. However.... When ever I read a sesshkago story that has inunotaisho in it he always has this thing for grand puppies. I find it hilarious.
omg...I love this collection! I only hope that there's more coming! (: I also hope you feel better!
*pouts* i wish there was a chapter story to go with this, it was such a good read even before the smut. :( oh well
--Kaminoko (c)2011
Bre (Chapter 19) - Sun 15 Aug 2010
I kinda feel you went soft on us this chap. You didn't really give us details like you have in other chapters. It was overall a good chapter tho.
nice chapter~! ;]
pookie (Chapter 19) - Thu 12 Aug 2010
The ending made me smile. I was so glad that she was able to get help for herself.
awe kinda wanted yusha to get purified but i LOVES this ^_^
deb (Chapter 18) - Thu 22 Jul 2010
I like most of your one-shots, but this one and Trapped run so close to rape... well it's kinda frightening to me. When she said no, it should have been honored. Yes she might have gotten excited about it, but that's what your body does... My favorites of your works are All my children, Pack Dynamics and Breeder. Thanks for sharing those.
deb
Tiffany (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Jul 2010
I remember reading a one-shot and I had seriously thought that it was part of this series, but not finding it here on Dokuga made me think again, but I had to ask. It was a SeeKag lemonfic and about how Kagome had Demonitis or something like that and how she ran into Sesshoumaru and spilled coffee on him and he took her to his house to clean her up and she was in heat but she didn't know cuz she stopped counting her days or something ever since Inuyasha broke up with her and then she was locked in the bathroom when Sesshoumaru finally realized she was in heat and yeahh. It seemed really similar to your works from what I remember, plus it played into the theme 'Trapped' as well.
But also, I hope you update soon, I've been hooked even before it became a collection of one-shots =]
BloodValkyrie (Chapter 4) - Sun 20 Jun 2010
These two people are evil.
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