Hmmm... sounds a lot like he wants her for more than a servant. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
I read this at 4:45 am so I'm a little delirious from the insomnia, but this update was still awesome even up to less the astute assessment. Plz Update soon.
Jips (Chapter 1) - Tue 09 Jun 2009
I love this story! These types of stories, where Sesshoumaru has so much power always end up going wrong, but I think you worked it out perfectly! You left Sesshoumaru's true character intact, but then you also gave Kagome leverage. I hope this makes sense, awesome job!
This has been a most interesting chapter. It has answered a good chunk of my questions. But I was wondering if Sesshou will ever train Kagome to be more effective with her powers? Will he teach her how to better defend herself w/ hand to hand combat and use of various weaponry? Will she convince him to get payback on both Inuyasha and his dad with pranks? Keep up the good work and update soon :p
| I like the insight as to how their relationship is progressing; slowly, which is a very good thing. Please keep up the great work.
Junella (Chapter 14) - Sun 07 Jun 2009
| Hi, I just came across your fic, and I quite like the unusual A/U premise. Very innovative. Keep it up! :)
| This is getting good. But I wonder... when will you let us know what Sesshomaru's purpose for Kagome is? (don't worry you don't have to answer that)
I can't wait for more. It makes me happy when I see this story has been updated.
Dani (Chapter 13) - Wed 03 Jun 2009
| I am so sorry I haven't reviewed in forever. I just want to let you know that I am still very much in love with this story and still look forward to what is coming up next. For some reason I could totally hear Kagome saying, "Ja". Anyways keep up the good work and I hope your muse desists in her disappearing act.
| I must say, I am really digging the story. At first I skipped over it because I usually only read canon stories, but this one is turning out to be really good. I am very impressed!
Wow, Inuyasha is an ass. No question about it. Lots of stories make him out this way, but you have done a great job at making his character not change at all...you don't make him a hero and then a jerk. He is a jerk through and through. I am still not sure exactly why Sessy marked her, and I am hoping that soon we will find out why.
Most surprising was Sango's character. I was so disappointed in how her family treated Kagome, and then how Sango started rumors about her and turned out to be such a shrew. I like it. She is always the best friend. It is good to see her character portrayed in a different light. Kudos!
| This is turning out so good. I don't think there are enough encouraging words out there to explain how much I enjoy this story. I am excite to see the way Sesshomaru is acting with the new attention Kagome has recieved. This is a great chapter.
| A new challenger maybe? Or was this a one time conversation? Is Sess going to start showing jealousy over the attenion she receives? Thank you for the update. I love this story!
Wow this is turning out awesome! Yeah, Sesshomaru really did change o:
I WONDER WHAT HIS PLAN IS O:
| This story made me chuckle... I had attempted the sleeping upright thing... never worked out. But great update. It amazing to see that they are starting to get along and move somewhere.
malom (Chapter 12) - Sun 24 May 2009
I really, really tried to empathize with the premise of this story. Yet, something in my psychological (perhaps cultural) make-up rebels. This is, however, well done in terms of form if not necessarily in content. Too many fanfiction are sloppily written and 'tis rare indeed to come across one using correctly crafted language. Hence, despite the darkness and depression each installment of this story brings, I am, against my better judgment, tempted to read. *sigh*
"Kagome took this time to practice her developing skill of sleeping upright against a wall while Sesshoumaru pretended not to notice." ==> best. line. ever. =D I actually laughed out loud ^^
anyways, I absolutely love your story, it's original, creative, and wonderfully written! I hope you update soon =)
Mika (Chapter 12) - Sun 24 May 2009
Hey there
Once again I love the new chapter ! THis whole Fanfic is really great, every day I hope for a new chapter *g*
So i reeeaally hope we'll be able to read chapter 13 soon =D
| once again me loves!!!
Sassy C (Chapter 11) - Mon 18 May 2009
| While I myself enjoy writing AU stories, I am almost always hesitant to read others' AU works. But yours caught my eye today, and I'm glad it did. You're writing is beautiful, and I love the way you describe the clashing between Kagome and Sesshomaru's powers. Needless to say, I await on bated breath for the next installment. :)
I'm only on chapter 4 but so far I'm really not liking Sesshoumaru or Sango and I've never read a story where I didn't like Sess right off the bat. The way you are portraying him so far is very different from how we normally see him, so obviously you're doing a great job with showing the cultural clash cause right now you've totally got me not liking him. Although I am sure all that will change, afterall, he has great plans for her ;)
Great story! Can't wait to read more:) and see how they resolve their differences. I love dominant sesshoumarus ;)
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