Hmmm... sounds a lot like he wants her for more than a servant. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
I read this at 4:45 am so I'm a little delirious from the insomnia, but this update was still awesome even up to less the astute assessment. Plz Update soon.
I love this story! These types of stories, where Sesshoumaru has so much power always end up going wrong, but I think you worked it out perfectly! You left Sesshoumaru's true character intact, but then you also gave Kagome leverage. I hope this makes sense, awesome job!
This has been a most interesting chapter. It has answered a good chunk of my questions. But I was wondering if Sesshou will ever train Kagome to be more effective with her powers? Will he teach her how to better defend herself w/ hand to hand combat and use of various weaponry? Will she convince him to get payback on both Inuyasha and his dad with pranks? Keep up the good work and update soon :p
Wow this is turning out awesome! Yeah, Sesshomaru really did change o:
I WONDER WHAT HIS PLAN IS O:
I really, really tried to empathize with the premise of this story. Yet, something in my psychological (perhaps cultural) make-up rebels. This is, however, well done in terms of form if not necessarily in content. Too many fanfiction are sloppily written and 'tis rare indeed to come across one using correctly crafted language. Hence, despite the darkness and depression each installment of this story brings, I am, against my better judgment, tempted to read. *sigh*
"Kagome took this time to practice her developing skill of sleeping upright against a wall while Sesshoumaru pretended not to notice." ==> best. line. ever. =D I actually laughed out loud ^^
anyways, I absolutely love your story, it's original, creative, and wonderfully written! I hope you update soon =)
Hey there
Once again I love the new chapter ! THis whole Fanfic is really great, every day I hope for a new chapter *g*
So i reeeaally hope we'll be able to read chapter 13 soon =D
I'm only on chapter 4 but so far I'm really not liking Sesshoumaru or Sango and I've never read a story where I didn't like Sess right off the bat. The way you are portraying him so far is very different from how we normally see him, so obviously you're doing a great job with showing the cultural clash cause right now you've totally got me not liking him. Although I am sure all that will change, afterall, he has great plans for her ;)
Great story! Can't wait to read more:) and see how they resolve their differences. I love dominant sesshoumarus ;)
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