....GASP. Sorry, I just read the first 30 chapters of your amazing story and am quite delighted that you included this Q and A chapter, as it gave me time to 'come up for air,' so to speak. This story is simply fantastic. Your skills at world-building are phenomenal, especially in the realm of the fourth tale. It read like a Hiyao Miyazaki movie in my head, especially the bits about the fish on the walls. Your seemless use of the fairy tales (which are all strange and foreign, and yet somehow oddly familiar) to guide the paths of our favorite characters is incredible to read, and I cant wait to see how the final three 'myths' will impact their lives. I also compliment you on handling and addressing such weighty concepts as morality and the nature of altruism in such a startlingly realistic way. It's quite refreshing.
The overall quality and skill of your writing and storytelling marks you as a talent above most. If I had any complaint--and mind you, I'm really reaching here--it's that you occassionally put commas in weird places. But that's about it. Everything else is outstanding. I am forcing myself to go to bed, as its 1am, and I hate having to tear myself away and not stay up the rest of the night and finish the story, because I remind myself that it will be there tomorrow, and I'll appreciate it all the more for not rushing through to the end. All in all, I simply can't think of enough adjectives to describe this story, or how much I like it, but needless to say, I adore it, and will relish reading more!
What more can I say except that I love this chapter!!!!
I really really loved how you ended this. I really can't see another option for it. You've written it beautifully with the characters in canon and I loved all of the extras that you drew in. Really a fabulous read! ^_^
Aw bummer!! I'd hoped that Kagome would retain her skills, but unfortunately, she is back to her 25 years prior self... All the same, I've really been enjoying reading your story! I've read up to this point: Chapter 39 in the past two days. Very compelling story, and I like how you've brought the two of them together. I really liked reading about Kagome, strong and confident in her skills. That was very cool. So great job! Love it!
DragonMagic (Chapter 60) - Tue 17 Nov 2009
This story was extremely well written. The characters were well developed. I enjoyed this tale greatly. I hope you continue to enjoy writing, and I will continue to enjoy reading your stories. Until next time.
wow wow wow wow wow! I didn't even know it was complete! I've definitely been away for too long! This is definitely the best story I'v read! Definitely worth the wait! I'm kind of sad that sess and kagome didnt end up together but I like it that way. Okay, I'm just getting over the fact that I've finished reading this story and I've been reading it since last year! Will you be making a sequel to this story?
| "You and the missus are getting on in age and with no children and the coming winter, you don't want to offend the only friend you got, do you? It'd be a shame if something happened to the two of you, because you didn't want to share. Now just lend me the damn dog."
that line had me lmao. that's something i know my crazy neighbour would say...she's like that.
| i really enjoyed the explanation of sesshoumaru's hate for inuyasha. most people follow the 'hanyou' line, having hsi father associate with a human who is weaker. To put the focus on disrespect for the bloodline is a very unique twist, and one i quite like.
| This was a fantastic ending for this fairytale. I love the strength of the princess in defeating the bandit, and we're starting to see grudging respect from Sesshoumaru to Kagome. I'm looking forward to reading the next fairytale!
| one more review before bed. updata soon :P
| so i thought i was on chapter 16 when i stopped last. i was on chapter 8 :P anyway, I am reading through. Sesshoumaru's arrogance delights me in this. Very much in character.
"Being able to ignore unnecessary noise is an essential skill in listening, miko
that line had me giggling like a school girl
Kai (Chapter 60) - Sun 13 Sep 2009
| wow. I really didn't see that one comming. Though how in gods name Sesshomaru showed back up there is a mystery to me. Imagining Inuyasha in like... half those situations though that's enough to make me laugh till my sides hurt. Especally the last one with the moon princess. Just... thinking of Inuyasha in a dress... *snickers* anyway
I loved it. Honestly love it. It took so long to read it and I'm glade I read it till the end. It was fantastic from begenning to the end. From when I started to read it when they first opened the scroll to when they left it just took me for a ride. Unlike a lot of fanfiction, it held something that no one else would ever think about doing. I applaud you for sticking with the story thoughout sixty chapters and I loved every single chapter. I would have to say that the ocean princess story was my absoult favorite though. It really was. I'm going to stalk your other stories now, but I wanted to let you know what I thought of the story. I really did love it and I know you'll continue to be a fantastic fanfic writter. Maybe you should think of actually becomming one some day
-kaistern
| That story was one of the best I've ever read. Truly. I'm definately going to check out anything else you've posted. I mean, wow. You are truly an amazing author with a fabulous imgination. I'm only sorry I couldn't have reviewed constantly with each chapter. I caught whiff of it when it was complete, BUT thank you for that lovely piece. Seriously.
| Well I certainly didn't expect that ending...But I have to admit it was amazing.
When I first happened to stumble onto this story I expected a half-hearted horribily plotted story, and I'm extremly please to see I was WAY too judgemental because this story is FREAKIN AWESOME.
*cough*
Erm...As I was saying, you had me from the first chapter. Though it took me a...very long time to finish this wonderful story I'm extremly glad I stayed up all night to read it. Honestly, I don't know what else to say, it was wonderful, beautiful, exciting, and acutally it kept me laughing for the most part and even made me tear up a little bit here and there. You definitly have a new fan. So I'd like to thank you for writing this unique story, and keeping the characters acutally...in character throughout the entire story. Which I know is extremly difficult to do especially in the sappy parts...anyway I'm rambling. I can't believe it's over...OK. Enough talk. Great story, loved it. Now crying because it's over.
Haha! On to the quest to find your other story! I hope it's out... :D
Alpine (Chapter 60) - Thu 06 Aug 2009
| I came across this fic and I started reading it.... 2 days later I was finished... I didn't get to read it along with the other people who read it while you were writing it but I have to say it is probably my favorite out of all the fics I have read. The characters on spot on and I am glad that there was no sappy ending where Sess and Kag stay together.. Just spectacular. Thanks for the great read, I will probably read it a few more times.. Don't think I could get sick of it..
Hugs
^_^
Mel (Chapter 31) - Tue 04 Aug 2009
| In regards to the question of what Shiro would look like should someone draw him... I picture Leonidas from 300... only with long silver hair and tatoos.
Bwahaha.
Hairann (Chapter 12) - Thu 30 Jul 2009
| [Quote] "Uhh," she groaned again, cradling her head in her hands, "I'm so stupid."
"That goes without question."[/Quote]
[Quote]"This isn't a fairy tale, this is a nightmare."
"There is a distinction?"[/Quote]
Hehe too funny. Had to wonder though with the guards being named Ginta and Hakkaku, why Kagome didn't make any mention to that fact.
Hairann (Chapter 4) - Thu 30 Jul 2009
| Well finished reading chapter 4 :). Hehe Sesshoumaru being 'attacked' by the cute and cuddly bear was just too funny. So far, very well written, storyline flows nicely and the descriptions easily paint the picture of being there. Onto the next chapter :).
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Sun 26 Jul 2009
| Yay you finally finished it :) Only read chapter one so far, though it's a great start, the story I mean not my reading lol, but seriously tired and in need of sleep so gonna have to pause here for now. I'll read more when I wake up :)
Eru (Chapter 52) - Sat 18 Jul 2009
| All I can say...
Brava.
<3
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