Very good first chapter. I absolutely liked how you portrayed their feelings of loss and pain
THANK YOU, LOVE THIS STORY, MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
That was a very sweet chapter. We'll see how much further they progress in the next one, right?
amy (Chapter 11) - Mon 28 Feb 2011
yes!
amy (Chapter 10) - Sat 19 Feb 2011
EXCELLENT START KEEP IT UP!
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