I love this story and it is so unique. Keep up the good work. I look forward to future chapters. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

I love this story soo much thought into it and it shows. I love how you choose real stories and weave them into this story. I really loved shiro : ) i wish that there would be more of him. Please continue :D

I do so love this story! Each adventure is better than the last. For some reason I like the dragon king, though I realize he harbors evil in his soul. I don't know, I suppose I feel like there is some good in there somewhere now that he has suffered through the trials of the scroll. Maybe I'm wrong. I tend to look for the good in everyone, when sometimes there isn't any. One of my weaknesses of character, or so I'm told. Anyway, great story, wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see how the battle against the centipede goes. Thanks for the read! ~Rin

I absolutely love the way you started this chapter off. So clever you are ladybattousai. I can't wait to see what happens next ;).

I'm not sure why I'm not getting the notices over on FF for it. I didn't know you published the last chapter of the story so I'm glad you're over here with this. Don't misunderstand me, I do love this story because it's unique and different but I don't know - something feels like it's missing. I can't put my finger on it. I don't know if I'm still juiced over the Shiro chapters because they were so fun or what I'm feeling about it so I'm not sure if it's the actual story or if it's my expectations of it. I do love an adventure but here I am stuck because it's a great story and this chapter is exceptional like the others but I didn't enjoy it. I do look forward to the rest of the chapters.

Its just this little bit that bugs me: "However, despite its weight, there was strength in its design, as she steadily drew the string with her fingers. Releasing it with harmonious twang, she grinned in satisfaction."(ladybattousai ch.29) Beautifully written, but not realistic. A true archer would never do that to a bow, it could not only hurt the person, but also create unnecessary tension on the bow, which could led to breaking. I know because Archery is my hobby. I did not mean to come off as a know-it-all, but I think it is nice to learn something new everyday. Okay now to the good part XD! I am really impressed with this story. It is beautifully written as I have stated before, the plot is developing nicely and I love the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome! I love how you integrate the Seven Feudal Fairy Tales into their lives as well as to how both of them deal with the situations. I just love it! Bottom line! good luck Keep up the outstanding work!

Ack! Cliffie! Why, oh why do you do this to us? :P

Ahhhh! sweetness. this is one of the few stories that can keep my intrest through each chapter!!! Kagome i believe is to naive for her own good! pleasse update as soon as humanly possible!!!

Kagome, Kagome, Kagome. When will u ever learn? The king isn't all that bad but he's not innocent either. Great chapter. I look forward to ur next great chapter