Yaaaay! Wow, that was a really quick update. I almost cried over this chapter. You've done an amazing job! I allways get so hyper and happy when I see you've updated. I eagerly await the next installment.
I wish you a wonderful week and much luck with the things to come.
This was a very entertaining chapter! I really enjoyed Fe-San's interaction with the ogres. Quite funny. There was a lot of nice action as well. I was really able to imagine the battle with the ogres. Very nicely done! And I also enjoyed Sesshoumaru's little moment of clarity. Do I detect the first stirrings of actual concern? Hmmm... Over all, I really enjoyed this chapter!
Ashes (Chapter 50) - Tue 27 Jan 2009
Ahhhhhh! Such a short chapter! But good in any case. Thanks for updating, I'm so exited for the next chapter... that doesn't sound gramatically correct... oh well, you get the picture.
I got really tense tward the end there! I've been following this story from the beginning, and it occures to me that mayhaps I should have left more reviews along the way. I am a big fan, and as soon as I see SFFT on any of the fan sites, I'm clicking away and reading- even if its a chapter I've seen before. I love the way you've constructed the storyline. I am eager to see how 'communicative' Sesshoumaru and Kagome are when explinations come about. :D
Thank you for sharing this wonderful tale,
Kyuthe
kotainuchan (Chapter 50) - Mon 26 Jan 2009
OMG!!!!!!! That was a really fast update. Wow what a great chapter little Kagome kicking some oger ass.
I'm so excited for this update! I think what you've done with this story is really incredible. There isn't another story like this out there; it is a wholly unique piece in the SessKag community. I wish I had your kind of creativity to create a plot like this. You've got a great mix of action and introspection, perfectly balanced, and you pick your adjectives with style: rather than an entire sentence of text to convey the setting or a character's mood, one or two well-chosen words suffice. It keeps the story moving without losing any of the impact. "Sharp and jagged, the harsh outline of the isle cut against the faded blue with its twin mountains piercing the heavens high above, bleeding a festering storm from the putrid wound." Fantastic line!
Ooh.. how's Kagome and crew going to handle this one? Or will this one be up to Do-Gu? lol. More please! :D
This story is wonderful. You're wonderful for portraying everything so well.
=3
Wow I seriously love how this is going so far. Good job ^^; I can't wait to see what Kagome will do to prove to Sesshomaru I hope it works :D
I love that it's long ^^ Because honestly this is a great story and I don't like it when great stories end D:
SO YAY XD: I just hope you update soon 8D
I worry when there's a long gap between updates, but you always manage to deliver a superior product. No matter how long it takes, I am grateful to read it until the end.
I dont care if its 60 chapters long...which it seems may happen, I'm sticking with it!!!! IT IS AMAZING!!!! Your detail, and your plots and all of the different characters are completely... ugh, i don't even know how to describe it. Please continue, can't wait for an update.
To tell you the truth i was actually a little worried since you hadn't updated in so long ,but i love your story so it was worth the wait. As usual great new chapter i can't wait for the next one ,but i can't help but think that maybe your going to do something about the fact that Kagome left Sesshoumaru on the ship. Something like have Sesshoumaru be really mad because they left him behind to sleep instead of fighting alongside everyone else and maybe that is going to hurt his pride. Or he's going to get captured because he's tired and has his guard down. For all i know Kagome could be in over her head and Sesshoumaru might be too late to save her although i doubt that ,but anyways great story can't wait for the next chapter and i hope that after this story is over you'll write another one. Ja-Ne
lady b, i'm with you all the way. I may need to catch up sometimes... but I'll still be here. lol. I am very eager for the next chapter and to see if Kagome can "prove herself" to our beloved DaiYoukai.
silverfairy89 (Chapter 49) - Tue 20 Jan 2009
Update soon!! i luuuv your story!!
I find myself excited for all and any chapters you post. This is truly a wonderful piece of art :)
I've been with you from the start, Lady, and I can't help but feel as if I've grown as well. You're astoundingly patient with character developement, and as a reader, I am greatful for your talents as a writer and as a psychologist. :D
Thank you for sharing,
Kyuthe
This story is off the hook! i luv it! especially the Shiro-sama part! You know wht would be funny? If (keyword IF!!!) Shiro-sama somehow crosses paths with Sessho and Kagome *when* they are in love, and shiro hits on Kagome 2 get Sesshomaru all riled up! that would be FUNNY!!! anyway i really like ur story so please update soon!!!!
Hi... So, I do agree this is a long tale, specially comparing with the others you've told... But you have an amazing style and a will to write this much, Gods knows how much I wanted to write like that... Well... I must confess I kindda lost "the whole picture", could you, please, sum up all the tale in a Authors Note... I can't remember who is who... Sorry to bother, thank you!!!
Best wishes
DJ
artemishel (Chapter 49) - Mon 19 Jan 2009
long or not keep going its one of the few stories that keeps interest
Interesting chapter. I can't wait to see how the battle goes, and I can't wait to see if Sesshoumau comes out of his "funk" so to speak. XD Please update as soon as you can!!
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