| That was an amazing chapter! ^_^
Loved the passion, the lust and the desire between the hot couple. I have to say, your lemon put me in the mood *snicker a bit, calling boyfriend*
ANYWHO! Everything was great. Except, I suggest breaking down some of the longer paragraphs. Instead of having so many long paragraphs, have some small ones. Believe me, it does wonders for the reader and the writer ;)
Other than that, it was great! ^_^
Keep up the great work
miranda (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 Jun 2008
| Wow, I cant wate for the next chapter.:)
Musouka (Chapter 4) - Mon 09 Jun 2008
| Absolutely Loved The New Chapter! I Have Been Looking Forward To It For A While ... Can't Wait To Read More!
| AWESOME CHAPTER. I STILL BELIEVE THAT KIKYO AND INUYASHA GOT OFF EASILY. UPDATE SOON PLEASE.
nickles (Chapter 4) - Wed 21 May 2008
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nickles (Chapter 4) - Wed 21 May 2008
| yep i like this one its hot hope u update soon with a wicked lime too
marquishawright@yahoo.com (Chapter 4) - Wed 21 May 2008
| please please update the story soon i can't wait to see what will happen next in the story i wonder will there be a lemon in the next chapter or will it tell us about inuyasha going to his father house please update this story is so great
tessahime (Chapter 4) - Wed 21 May 2008
| WOW! So happy you updated! Love this story so much!
gracy (Chapter 4) - Wed 21 May 2008
| oh my god wht up thanks for updating soon. This chapter was so cool. me wishing in my head:update, update,update, update....
| wow I started reading this on A single spark and found it on here today. i love what you did to shippo in this fic. finally someone gave the little fox some real backbone. thanks a million and please keep writting
| really hope Jaken or anybody doesn't junk Kag's camera. she'll be really mad if that happens I bet. pretty good story. I wonder what new twists you'll give us
gracy (Chapter 3) - Sun 18 May 2008
| please update soon!!!! I love it.!!!
| Fuck. I love this story! There are a few typos and such here and there, but that doesn't matter any because of the passion in your words. I do quite enjoy your characterizations of Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Kagome has grown from her bubbly teen years, but that's quite understandable. As well, I do quite enjoy the sexual tension between the two. More please :D
| This is divine lol! Trust you to meet and exceed all expectations. Nicely done!
snowbird (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 May 2008
| You've got me hooked with this first chapter and I definately want more! I've always liked a strong Kagome. And, of course, a v-e-r-y sexy Sesshoumaru. I'm already familiar with your writing talents. I'm a fan of your other story "A New Beginning". I've been waiting since Feb for you to continue it. No one has wrote their beasts in the way you did. It's precious, especially the birthing. Anyway, please finish it and continue with this "delicious" story.
snowbird (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 May 2008
| Aha! I found this story on your FFN site and it has 4 chapters. I left you a review there. A big wowie for the dance scene. Your story is not the only one that is lagging behind other sites chapterwise. ASS being phased out is creating a big mess for you authors. My judgement for this new site is still on hold.
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