Fantastic fic and beginning! Will there be more? Please tell me there'll be more?! The only thing that confused me was that as a reader there was no 'building up' of Sesshomaru's feelings for Kagome. It's like one moment he's being rude and annoyed w/ her--the next he's asking her out....And, does he know Shippou? How would he know Sesshomaru was interested in Kagome in the first place? Please don't take this as a flame--it's anything but that. Really--I'm extremely interested in continuing this story....just wanted to point out a few things to you. :)
Faithful Reader,
~Saholia ^.^
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