This is cute. You really should continue it
Yum, short but caliente! I loved this shortie!
|What a sexy, delightful read! I only wish it was longer though:)
The short is good, but I find the title decidedly uncomfortable, in a pervertedly amusing way.
(Chapter 1) - Tue 13 Jan 2009
LOL! I used Kagura's feather as well for my challenge submission. Well done. Looks like the makings of a longer story, any plans in it?
|I wouldn't mind this blooming into another chapter. lol Well I have to admit that this story is really good. hugs and puppies
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Tue 13 Jan 2009
Haha! Poor Kags can't even bathe without getting kidnapped! Nice entry! Karma for feather and front runner for least words karma!