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I listened to the mentioned music. I liked it, it goes with what you wrote. I enjoyed both very much. Thanks for writing and sharing this. ;)

Wow, this was so beautiful. I was entranced by her desolation and for a while I thought she was traveling the train that carried lost souls to their next life but when she talked about her job, I began to question whether or not if it was literally real life and that she was lost to her loneliness until Sess came along. It takes him a year before he tells her to come with him finally ending her neverending journey. Your descriptions of her isolation and of how she views the people around her was so visual that I could close my eyes and see the rain, hear the piano but not the voices..I can't wait to read more of your amazing work.

This story was really awesome. I love it. I think it was really well written, and was really imaginative. I hope to read more from you really soon. I think this was a really great way to express depression. Perfect!

Your writing is beautiful.  The entire tale is very lyrical and esoteric.  But I couldn't figure out what the reality was.  Is the train the afterlife, sort of a purgatory?  Is there literally a train?  Or is it symbolic of her life being mundane and lonely because she is depressed and withdrawn?  Maybe both?  I'd like to know what was actually happening.  But still, it is a well written piece.

Wow that was amazing.  It leaves you with a lot of questions, but truthfully I don't care that they aren't answered.  You do an amazing job with first person and you really pull the reader into the story.  I could feel what they felt, see what they saw.  I hope to see many other great works from you in the future.

Wow…That was really great!  I enjoyed reading that a lot.  If I had to describe your fic in one word, it would be beautiful.  I felt like I was on the train!  I felt like I was Kagome!  You handle first person pov so well.  Just one thing though: darekatasukete is two words in romanji – dareka tasukete.  I know this might sound odd, but I felt like I was on the train, and watching the seasons and Sesshoumaru enter and exit my own life.  It was wonderfully refreshing to read. 

ducky out!

this story was interesting but a little confusing, but that may have been just me being a little out of it:D...it was very well written, Kagome must have been in a pritty deep depression to have been as out of it as she was, you described her emotions very well, it wasn't hard to see that she was lost, it was a very good story, but  quick question, how long was she on that train??...lol...hope to see more of your work in the future!!