" Miroku had stayed behind to protect her, and Shippou stayed behind to protect Sango from being protected by Miroku." ==> taht sentence made me laugh out loud xP
I'm so happy you decided to continue this =D the story is awesome and I'll be following it closely =)
OMe`fingGOD!!! i LOVE THIS!! i cant honestly tell you how much i love this fic, i love the logical turn of events, really Inuyasha is such a jerk being mad because Kagome in the seemingly years he's waited and said nothing, has found someone else, albeit a bit unconventionally, still she's not looking to the hanyou for anything any more and its horrible that he even has the right to question her about anything. How many nights has he gone off with the dead miko? And kagome said anything! just because he assumes something doenst mean jack squat! dear god you've got me all hopped up! i s0o0o0 want more of this and how!
I could rant on and on, but i really hope Kags grows a back bone and tells the dog boy off. i love this i love it i love it! update so0n or i'll pounce you r0oishly~!
- r0ozilla
this very good and i am enjoying very much.
I think that you should have kagome tell inuyasha off.
he has no right to question her. she ows him nothing
Nobody (Chapter 2) - Sat 17 Jan 2009
How could you end it there? I want to keep reading but everytime i try it ends at the same spot. Stupid computer cant access the next chapter for some reason. Beautiful as always my dear! i cant wait for more! but if i must i must!!
l33t (Chapter 2) - Sat 17 Jan 2009
Wow, talk about a cliffhanger. I'm at the edge of my seat, if I weren't sitting in my bed. Anyway, that was an amazing chapter. This story is, needless to say, very well-written. Kudos to you! Please update soon!
Uh oh. Little lady needs to be honest now while she still can. She should have been honest in the first place... this doesn't look good for Kags!
| ohhh dear... what a cliffy. >.<;; and the lemon was awesome. :3
| Omg I Loved it I think that it should continue on more.
sesshou_lover (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Jan 2009
| I think it was really cool how you worked the concept with the cannon angle. It was very original and totally believable. I for one think that it would be interesting to have other inter-connected one-shots happening, but it could also work very well to allow the reader themselves to determine would could happen in their own minds. Very well done.
Nefret (Chapter 1) - Thu 08 Jan 2009
I loved it. And I'd totally love to see more. :D
This is excellently written! I'd love to see a series of oneshots. This is too good to not have more written on it!
LC Rose (Chapter 1) - Thu 08 Jan 2009
| That was awesome, Lady Sianna!!! I loved it and would so like to see more of this. You did a wonderful job and I didn't find the backstory too long at all. It was nice to have something to grow on...*oh, my gutter marbles assert themselves!!* LC runs runs in fear while she still can!!
All I can say is wow. That was amazing.
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