OH MY GOD! the story was amazing! The character portrayals were right on point. And the second lemon was not "dry" at all. I was never bored and I thank you so much that you made it a chapter story instead of a one shot.
I know you wrote this story forever ago, but on the off chance you still look at the reviews~ oh my god, oh my god, oh my god this story. SO GOOD. I absolutely loved your portrayal of the two characters, Sesshoumaru especially. So often authors portray him so lovey dovey and it's so out of character it throws me. I never imagined an author could write the progression of his feelings and experiences so realistically. I was seriously squealing all over the place because this was one of those rare stories where I really felt like it was Sesshoumaru, actual Sesshoumaru, going through all these things and not just a caricature.
In conclusion, you're amazing and I love you and THANK YOU for not keeping this fantastic story a one-shot. <3 All the best~
Rhonda (Chapter 4) - Fri 06 Dec 2013
Just stumbled on this and love it..Love It...LOVE IT!!!!!!!
The story wqas awesome and it had a wonderful ending.
"Brace yourself..." LOL! That was a simply delicious story. Just the right touch of adventure and drama, with plenty of citrus for flavoring. Thank you so much for sharing it.
Really gooooooood. I really loved how you ended it. Thanks for the great read!
amy (Chapter 4) - Sat 23 Jul 2011
You lied! It was romantic in a very curious way. He came to love her, cherish her and want to spend his life with her! that is the very definition of romantic just not sappy, more solid!
I like it a lot. Good story. I'm glad it went from a one-shot to a few chapters. I would have been really dissapointed not to get to this ending.
Jailene (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Mar 2011
.. -stares at screen with kinky eyes- LOL! So.. HOT! o_o
joyouki (Chapter 4) - Mon 10 Jan 2011
I cant believe its over......sequel??? please!! This was a juicy lemon that needs to be squeezed more...lol LOVED IT
I think you are a very gifted writer and I enjoyed every minute of this story. I usually hate the endings where sessh does not see Kag for 500 years but you made it work. I loved it! Keep up the good work and I hope to read more stories from you in the future.
smcandy (Chapter 3) - Tue 24 Aug 2010
Excellent, excellent so far again so good. Nicely done I am growing more interested in this fan fiction by the chapter ^^.
smcandy (Chapter 1) - Tue 24 Aug 2010
Nicely done I really like it so far.
Keep it up hope you update this fiction again when you have time.
Wonderful story. :) Very erotic.
Serena (Chapter 4) - Tue 11 May 2010
loved it!!
Wonderful story, I enjoyed reading it immensely. Even though this was a relatively short story, you were able to develop Sesshoumaru's and Kagome's relationship in believable way. As for the lemons, they were awesome. I've read some of your other stories on ff.net and love them too. You said in your author's note for Absolutions Pursuit, that you were done writing. I hope not because you are really good. But I wish you well with whatever you decide to pursue next, and am sure you will be successful.
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