It's been a great ride and I was so happy with how the story ended. I loved it and I will be reading it again soon..
Hugs
Alpine ^_^
Your little goodbye note made cry a little, I guess hehe. I feel...I don't know. I've been reading since a Single Spark, waiting, bursting in joy with every new chapter you posted, reviewing (most of the time hehe)....and now its over.
I leave this fanfiction with a deep sense of satisfaction, and I congratulate you as a fellow writer for having finished this story. I have to manage that yet hahaha. And as a reader, thank you. Thank you for such a wonderful story. I'll miss seeing the update messages in my inbox (: Let me tell you, this was as good as reading an excellent book. If it were a printed version, I would no doubtedly be smiling while turning the last white page and then the cover.
Congratulations Chie! And thanks a lot!!! :D
I love you!!! I love the ending and I love this story. It's been one of the first stories I bookmarked and it's been priviledge to read it. Thank you!!!
tiana (Chapter 19) - Thu 18 Nov 2010
omg im lovin thiz story
I loved how Sesshoumaru proposed to Kagome. That was him to the point! lol. I'm glad Naraku finally got what was coming to him. I've never been a fan of Hiten but he has become my second favrorite character because of your story! I hope he at least gets a little action in the final chapter. lol Amazing story and can't read the final part! :)
Oh..I've been consistently managing to forget this in every. Single. Review.
I heart your characterisation of Hiten. Never was a badass made so b-a-d-a-s-s in any work of Inuyasha fandom! Or at least none that combined complete nerdiness with asskicking in equal dollops. You really should reward him with a girlfriend in the epilogue. Or at least sex. XD
That was quick! Both the update date and the dealing with Naraku.
The Naraku part left me quite satisfied, so no complaints there. Izayoi's reaction when she welcomes Sess back into the family was awesomely heartwarming too. But I wish you'd spent more time on Inupapa, his guilt, anger, hurt and everything. it just seemed a little too..less, considering what he put Sess through...I mean, he effectively took away his son's reputation, family, name and several precious years of youth. Angsting over that definitely needed more space. I hope you elaborate more on Inupapa and Sess's residual feelings regarding the whole mess and each other in the epilogue!
Love the proposal. Very me. XD I'm not much for wuffy proposals with candles and wine and roses and blah blah blah...okay...I detest them. Especially detest the roses. And your proposal was a perfect Sess proposal! Somehting I could read without cringing and not even once have the following thought cross my mind:
"Dear Eros, if I was in that girl's shoes, I'd never have been able to look the guy in the eyeball ever again! Now, should I flee or grin like a supremely embarrassed Cheshire Cat or flee? Oh....more sap....forget it, let's do them all."
I did wish for more Sess-Kag moments, though. But I realose that this chapter was basically focusing on cleaning up the mystery and letting Sess return home. So...expecting loads and loads of unabashed SessKag in the epilogue!!! ^.^
Mia (Chapter 18) - Fri 29 Oct 2010
Have I reviewed this chap yet? I'm not sure... :/
All I know is that I can't wait!!!! :D
I REALLY wanna see how the whole company reacts with Sesshoumaru's grand entrance! ^^
Keep up the great work and PLEASE update sooon!
Only ONE?! You at least NEED an epilogue as well!!!
oh dearie me my! I loved it....every single word of this chapter kept me hanging on to the keyboard by the fingernails. I'm glad to know we'll see the end soon.... the happily ever after has been awaited for a long time (I began reading this fic back when it started on A Single Spark)!! I just have one tiny tic, though I shouldn't be having it. But we readers are an ungrateful lot, so - it seemed a little...rushed to me. i expected a few more chapters of intrigue and damage before they find out who hates Sess so much.
But i'm NOT complaining, no! XD and, lady, do us the wondrous favour of not waiting another two months before you give us relief! it's been YEARS already, c'mon!!!!
Not to mention there was no reconciliation between Sesshomaru and his father. I mean I expected the woman 'Sara' to be Sesshomaru's mother trying to get back at Sesshomaru's father for being faithless teamed up with Onigumo.
You never said who the woman was or explained why they took Kagome or why they sent the pictures to Kikyo. What was the point? In my opinion it's a great story but you didn't really finish it. The ending like that was unfulfilling.
Mia (Chapter 17) - Wed 15 Sep 2010
I was so happy when I saw the update in my inbox! You have no idea how I felt... But then, as I was reading, I realized that I already knew all of this... And it took me a while but I finally remembered... You already uploaded this to FFN. T___T
But still, a good refresher of TT!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update for real soon! ^^
tiana (Chapter 16) - Mon 19 Jul 2010
i luv this part wen sesshy rescues kagome itz cute i rlly am enjoyin the story and i cant wait to see the rest keep up the gud work
Awww a cliffy! But I'm glad Sesshoumaru saved her. Now to see if they will get out in time before the other come back! Great chapter Chie and can't wait to see what you come up with next! Update soon! :)
Mia (Chapter 16) - Sat 17 Jul 2010
OH MY GOD!!!! This is such a cute story!!!!!!! I love the way you twisted the traditional SesshxKag modern day status. Please please PLEASE, update soon!!! I think I might die if you don't!!
And great job on the English! ^^ You write very well for someone who doesn't speak English natively.
Oh no not a cliffy! Just when Sess finally admits he has feelings something goes wrong. This chapter had me on the edge of my seat! Great chapter and can't wait to read what happens next!
YAY!! The plot thickens...even more. It is interesting that none of them made the connection with Kagome disappearing and Inu getting all that strange stuff in the mail.
Anyways, great job!! Looking foward to the next chapter :)
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