Honestly the story is actually starting to drone on. I find myself barely reading it and basically skipping through. It's a good story but instead of taking up momentum it feel stationary and nothing exciting is happening. For example Kagome's dress was a hyped up I expected people to pause when they saw her. Instead it sounded like Ayame had the best fit. Sesshomaru seems  unnecessarily bored, not stoic, not cool and cold, just bored and boring. I'm not aimlessly reviewing, I have taken into account that there has been some growth and development, but not enough to grab the attention needed. It just seems a little vanilla.

Some parts of this are a little bit....... Childish is the best way I can describe it.

Really? How can she see all this and not figure its Sesshomaru? Lmao it makes no sense

A while back I didn't give this story a chance because I read right when the assault on Sesshomaru started. I couldn't handle it. Had I read a bit further I would have realized the story is actually pretty good. I'm happy I'm giving it a second chance I'm already in chapter 3.

Whoa I am late to the party. Just read this today, and loved every moment of it! Great AU fic, refreshing to see Sess wasn't portrayed as all-mighty-and-powerful and to see him actually relying on someone else for support. Can't wait to read more of your works!

Nice chapter. I love all the dancing around. I think my heroes, Rin and Shippou, are going to get them together for sure! Izayoi has sharp eyes. 

I’m really enjoying this story. I know I haven’t been reviewing every chapter like I usually do. I like the different story and I’ve enjoyed seeing how you have worked all the characters in. Cheers!

Finally finished this story. I must say that even though there were grammatical errors and whatnot that took abut away from the reading experience, this was probably one of the more interesting premises I've read. That first chapter though! Atmosphere was/is definitely your strong point because that and the last two or so chapters were the best. 

And be for once, someone doesn't portray Inupapa (who I kind of loathe ha) as the all-knowing dad who wants to teach his sons a lesson beyond the grave. He's rash, stubbborn and lacks faith. AKA he's not a God lol

This was a great story and I loved that little Rin was really his child. I really want to know what happened to the baby mama though.

Wow. That firay chapter was explosive. 

Que linda historia Chie!! Atrapante desde el principio hasta el final!!:)

Interesting... not really my cup of tea but a decent story. Your grammar in places still messes with me, but at least your consistent.

Loved Loved the story! I'm so glad you recommended it to me! I love Hiten, he's my favorite character in the story haha! Great job!

Great story!

Well that was one enjoyable read! :'3

Don't mind people correcting you about the usage of words like "recognise", "agonise" and whatsoever for I doubt that the Americans are taught in school enough about the differences between their English and the British one. There were some minor writing mistakes though which I think everybody makes sometimes, so it would not have been bad to have it betaed (programs can't detect everything!). I remember one of them particularly, because I couldn't figure out for a while what the word was that seemed to be missing - it was about the shard which pierced Kagome's side (?), but it read as sharp, so I tried to guess just what sharp thing was piercing her XDDD fragment? piece? shard? I was puzzled @.@

Anyways, great story, you've got nice writing skills! I'm quite jealous :DD And who knows, maybe I'll even do some smexy fanart out of this :3 <3

I just wanted to let you know that in Chapter 11, in the two paragraphs at the end of the gala, you called Mr. Thornwell (sp?) Mr. Rochester. Wasn't that one of the douches who tried to make Kagome look stupid. Just thought you ought to know.

Anyway, this story's amazing! I love it. ^^ You're an amazing writer. You should pursue it for real.

All I can Say is freaking awsome story! Just finished reading it:)

“Besides, he might be the only one to match Renkotsu’s skill, like it or not, we neediteHHHHHHHHHHjhihFo Hiten's ..." huh???

otherwise, a brilliant story!!!!!

I must bow to your brilliance. Then promptly do the homework I have neglected to complete in order to finish your lovely tale.  =P

~~Mizuko~~