This was a good story and I liked the idea of Sesshomaru not having experience.
This was a darling story, but the ending was lacking. Not the lemon per se, but just the feeling behind it felt really forced. I enjoyed the story though. It was sweet and a bit realistic.
It was so gross of Kagome to cook food without washing her hands. Yuck!
ponpiri (Chapter 3) - Sun 12 Mar 2017
This chapter was amazing. You nailed their personalities with those questions, especially logic-driven Sess.
Also, I really liked this Sesshomaru portrayal.
Uhmmmm the story was great but the end sex scene was lacking. They messed around before so they shouldn't be that clueless. This was rushed. The build up was so good though. Sigh, I feel a little deceived :(
Thanks for sharing :)
Nicole (Chapter 5) - Thu 02 Jan 2014
I love Souta's questions. Surprisingly insightful for one so young... then again, perhaps the young are the only ones who can ask them.
Charlene (Chapter 6) - Thu 15 Mar 2012
| I enjoyed this. Sesshoumaru's awkwardness was rather unexpected but endearing just the same.
I have to admit that my favorite part was Souta's 10 questions to Houjou and Sess. The fact that it finally got through Houjou's head that he didn't really know Kagome and the way you got across Sesshoumaru's awkwardness changing into a man, in love with Kagome, but also knowing her and knowing himself was short of brilliant.
I could sense the change in you as the story grew. And although the last chapter felt hurried up to get it over with, you still managed to make it feel like they were still in character.
I'm also glad you didn't go into details of their first night as mates. That would have ruined (in my opinion) the premise on which the rest of the story was based.
It was definitely an unusual but yet interesting story.
hallel (Chapter 6) - Thu 19 Nov 2009
this was awesome and well done and hilarious. I loved that you made sessho chaste dispaite his age. way too may writers make him out to be some kind of man whore. I was laughing alot, kudos to you.!
I like this story. Please update soon.
That was great, best thing i've read in while, very brief but straight to the point. It was perfect in every way i wouldn't change a thing. PERFECTION!!
wynter89 (Chapter 6) - Tue 13 Oct 2009
I found a lot of moments or choice of words amusing! I love your sense of humour!!!
Your "Kikyou germs" I thought was priceless!
But the quote I found most amusing was "...murdering fluffy bunnies than be in the dungeon of awkwardness with Miroku." (Miss Kargura) Therefore I present you with a five stars and an nobel piece prize nomination! XD
Congrats on a fic well done!!!
Good luck
I look forword to read more of your work!
JL (Chapter 1) - Tue 13 Oct 2009
Great start. Can wait to read more!
I can understand that you don't feel it anymore, but it is so incredibly sweet a story and I think you portrayed both Kagome and Sesshoumaru perfectly! I enjoyed it thoroughly; so much so I'm not even going to mention the few mistakes I spotted. >:)
That was so darling! And Kagome and Sesshomaru's first time was so believable. What a great story... How about a sequel?
Cute!!!
Have I told you how much I love this story? It's hard to pick one element, but the reasons your version of Kagome can't get comfortable with the idea of a relationship with InuYasha are the same that bother me. Even if he loves her, it will always be tainted by Kikyo germs, and the memory of Kikyo. That's why things with InuYasha can never be pure and good and right. Kagome deserves to be someone's FIRST choice.
autumngold (Chapter 6) - Tue 13 Oct 2009
I appreciate that you made Kagome's first time believable. You didn't have Kagome cum seven times while Sesshoumaru was able to hold off his orgasm for hours. Poor Kagome though, I thought after all of the things that they've done they might have tried some forplay! Thank you so much for completing this story! It's so disappointing when good stories like this don't have an ending! Great ending too! I'm glad that they were able to live happily ever after! :)
Hmmm. Would you laugh at me if I told you that was one of the best lemon I've ever read? You could, but still, I'm not joking.
Because that was painfully realistic, and innocent. Sesshomaru is always depictured as the perfect lover who makes Kagome scream with one arching of his brow, but, let's face it... first times are often awkward and not really mind-blowing. Thank you for your honesty.
I hope all is well for you, it didn't seem like it in your last words...
Gambatte.
Dewa mata
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