I absolutely enjoyed reading about Kocho, Shinsui, the Inu no Taisho, and young Sesshoumaru. This chapter really did further enrich the story, because not only do we have two very interesting main characters, we now know more about the people around them! You also do an excellent job in displaying a character's emotions. Great, great chapter!
Sess2023/Topaz Gold (Chapter 13) - Wed 11 Sep 2024
I feel like your portrayal of Sesshoumaru fits his character beautifully. He is devoted, romantic, and caring, but he also feels fear when it comes to love and I think that is a good thing to add. This is someone who is 'The Killing Perfection' and is an excellent warrior, but in a great story, there is no such thing as a perfect character and you've showed his flaws but you showed them in a way that is understandable and he will grow from the mistakes he made, from the fear he felt. I wholeheartedly believe that if he knew what Kagome was going through, 'that man' wouldn't even be breathing at this point in the story, but Sesshoumaru stayed away because he thought she was happy with someone else.
It seems like they're both broken (Kagome understandably moreso), but they will heal together. It's a beautiful sentiment. :-)
Sess2023/Topaz Gold (Chapter 11) - Tue 10 Sep 2024
This was a fantastic chapter!
Sess2023/Topaz Gold (Chapter 9) - Tue 10 Sep 2024
It's really such a great that Sesshoumaru is written in such a romantic, gentle (yet still fierce) light. It's very heart warming and I can't stop smiling when I read this story.
Sess2023/Topaz Gold (Chapter 7) - Sun 01 Sep 2024
This was such a beautiful chapter that ended on a very sweet note!
Sess2023/Topaz Gold (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Aug 2024
This is a lovely story with a lovely writing style. Off I go, to chapter 4. :-)
Kathy (Chapter 35) - Mon 08 Jul 2024
I'm so glad Sesshomaru will strip that man of any work and prestige. This was a sweet chapter
cristinPacheco8 (Chapter 35) - Fri 28 Jun 2024
Me gustó mucho el capítulo, Sesshomaro se quedó con ganas de destriparlo yo le hubiera hechado acido en sus partes eso seria peor que la muerte
REDWOLF (Chapter 35) - Fri 28 Jun 2024
Glad you updated. For some odd reason my review for this chapter went for the previous chapter...odd.
REDWOLF (Chapter 34) - Fri 28 Jun 2024
Wow. .. I was so surprised that you updated because last night late I ran across this wonderful story and said to my self "I wish this story would get an update" and you did , YOU UPDATED! I guess you heard my thoughts telling you to update, lol, thank you . I'm glad Sesshoumaru let that evil man have it mwahaha it's a wonder that every one there didn't mess on their selves.
Such a wonderful and lovely chapter glad Seashomaru destroyed Sasaki Hajime lively hoodto make the man suffer like he made Kagome suffer.
Kathy (Chapter 34) - Tue 26 Mar 2024
Oh damn!
OMGGGG how i have waited for this! Can't wait for the update.
Anonymous (Chapter 34) - Tue 26 Mar 2024
Ooooooh! The long-awaited confrontation! I am so looking forward to the next chapter! I love this story!
Gasp (Chapter 34) - Thu 21 Mar 2024
Omg I almost forgot about this guy!!! Can't wait for what's next!
REDWOLF (Chapter 34) - Thu 21 Mar 2024
Wow...can't wait for the next update.
REDWOLF (Chapter 34) - Thu 21 Mar 2024
Wow...can't wait for the next update.
cristinPacheco8 (Chapter 34) - Wed 20 Mar 2024
Que interesante que está ahora que tiene delante al maltratador de Kagome que pasará, me gustó mucho este capítulo y espero que actualices pronto
Kshadeslady (Chapter 34) - Wed 20 Mar 2024
Well DAYAM!! That was quite the twist and surprise at the end of this lovely long chapter. That was awesome!
Nanyin (Chapter 34) - Tue 19 Mar 2024
Yep, the woman in me is squealing so loud here. Take care of what's yours boo. ????
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