Please update soon 

Wait! What? Did he kidnap her? Oh, Lord! I didn't expect that, well, actually I was expecting that but not so fast. Anyway, I like it.

ohh please more♥?????????I always love to read Kagomes blue eyes and black hair♥?????

Hello, 

I really like the premise, and I think you are doing a good job. However, I would strongly recommend getting an english primary beta reader. They can help give you notes and improve your English. I say this as someone who is bilingual with english as my first language. Your sentences run on, and there is a lot of structural and word choice errors. These could be easily addressed by having a little help. This starts with the title it should be Sesshomaru's Heir Machine. The apostrophe s ('s) denotes ownership in the English language. (Don't be fooled though there are exceptions like it's an abrevation for "it is" along with the possessive.) Don't be discouraged though, english is a heard language. There are so many rules and exceptions. getting a beta will help you learn and help your reader understand and stick with the story! I can't wait for more and hope you can find someone to help. 

 The two chapters was good, I enjoyed reading them. I can not wait to read more to see what will happen next. I hope kagome will be powerful and not weak.   

Really enjoyed the story hope you can finish it. It was good tead and i am ready for more

It's a great concept, do you need a beta reader to help with your English? You can send me a message, and I'd be more than happy to help.????

Its not bad for someone who is not a natural born english speaker. Your sentences need work they do not flow. I believe with practice you will get better. I like your story ideal. So if you keep on posting new chapters I'll keep on reading. Keep on trying until you get.