Es hermosa!!!! Felicidades 

Beautiful!!!

I have never been captivated more by a story. Thankyou for writing this and Thankyou for allowing us to read it. This novella has been a gift and it is not one I will squander. I hope all stories I read will be a quarter of the greatness presesnted here. 

congradulations  

They should make a movie out of this fic <3

My absolute favorite fan fiction I've ever read!! Beautifully written, and so well researched into the correct dialogue. Love love love!

Soo... Just realized, I left my review for this story on the "Whatever it takes" Oneshot. Oh well. Its still applicable. Maybe a little confusing to read, tho. :D But just to be sure - I love this story!

Ah tis a sad thing to watch it end but wow this was truly a beautiful story. It's been a while since I've enjoyed a new Dokuga story like this. Would like to have known about Inuyasha and Souta but honestly I think I would cry. So perhaps this was a mercy lol. Good job! I'm happy I gave it a shot. Thank you for sharing

Urgh the hair color change! Feels so..... weird. I mean her mom had black hair surely it could have stayed. It's always been a little hard to see Sessh and Kagome with the same color hair. The different shades is what makes their contrasting abilities and personalities stand out more. Like ying and yang. It's just an unsolicited opinion I mean no harm. At the end of the day it's the author's choice to make it their story. Cause who am I kidding, I've made my character's hair purple to fit my own narrative.

Lmao the Author's note had me laughing!! Anyway sad Chapter, I felt every moment of it. Really this is a great read. Ps I saw that you were still editing. There's a part where you meant to say six but said sex. That's the only mistake I noticed. Sorry for intruding.

Amazing! ????

Oooooo dunndun dunnnnnnnnnn. Damn this story is too juicy!

Oh my this chapter was a good one. Toga is a delight in everyway. Whew Sesshomaru is every woman's dream come true for a healthy, non toxic, relationship. Kagome is so lucky. I have such high expectations for men because of this bloody website that I've been waiting for years. Haha

Noticing the pattern of Kagome making the first move constantly

I loved the story but I do wonder what happened to Sota and Rin? Did Inuyasha and his family live a long life?

Aw no, poor Kagome. Reading that must have been hard for her.

Damn kinda jumped right in there after that fight hih? Lmao I'm a little confused

I enjoyed every moment! An awesome starter fic if I ever read one. Thank you sooo much for sharing! 

This story was amazing from beginning to end but I do wish we were able to find out what happened to Souta. 

Oh my I love this story I'm glad its been reposted can't wait to read more.

Pretty much kinda obsessed with Kagome and Sesshoumaru's developing dynamic in this story. That lemon scene was, phew, hotness *fans self* Can't wait to see how Inuyasha reacts ;)