Writing something else than just "Aaaaawwwwwhh" is very hard for me right now. XD
I loved the story, Chie!
I think you described the fact that there are different *kinds* of love pretty good. Kagome and Inuyasha loved each other, but that love was meant to be for friends and that's ok. I enjoyed reading a mature break up, if that makes sense. XD They will be there for each other despite their relationship not working out and that is rare to find.
The change in POV was gold!!!!! Insecure Sesshoumaru? I LOVE it! He was so sweet planning every detail just to forget the speech he was intending to hold. And his pondering on whether he should hold her hand or not was too cute! Those little awkward moments turned this story into a rare gem.
I hope you will be able to inspire people to try and portray a Sesshoumaru who is perfect because of his imperfections and insecurities. Unfortunately I haven't come across many stories of that type.
All hail Chie! <3
And BOATS!
VS out
You know that stupid little giddy smile you find on your face when you see something really really sweet? Your stories always give me that. You write so beautifully, and I'm here smiling stupidly at my screen because I'm so happy XD
Mecca (Chapter 1) - Fri 01 Jan 2021
I loved this cute oneshot. I live for a soft Sesshoumaru :*
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