I guess, rich philanthropist Sesshoumaru is really well known. Honestly tho Kags, this wasn't gonna be an easy conversation no matter what. And, yes, whole he was hurt during the whole thing, Dan didn't have to be such a dick about it.
Tempers flair hard with this group doesn't it?
I appreciate that you write them realistically, with flaws and that they make mistakes. Beautiful work
Well that's a literally cold bucket of water on fevered skin. I swear my heart dropped. Gah of course he'll come ruin everything!
Wow! LOL! Heart to heart, a big lemon and a big breakup fight! Alot happening. And Sosuki knows the Lord of the west. Huh? Interesting. Digger better start running. Can't help it. Don't like him. When Sess finds out he tried to kiss her, he's a walking deadman! Heh heh ! Yeah buddy! Can't wait for more!
Wow what a chapter..... Loved it...
That... I can't believe. Dan is such a jerk. She is best off without him. How does her boss know sessh!?!?!
Woah...a lot happened in this chapter. Thank you for the awesome update
LOVED it!! Smooth. Not too fast. A few typos here and there but it was still an amazing read!! I like that you wrote Kagome unsure of her own feelings because that's how it is in real life. You're angry and don't want them to follow, but you also kind of sort of want them to follow... and sesshomaru being controte, or showing anger and calling her out made it even more authentic. Well done!
Amazing keep the yummy goodness coming!
It was definately a reckoning. I loved Sess on his knees. Damn!!! LOL! Now, after all the chaos, he's invited to stay. Maybe he'll show her his belly. Such a bad doggy! But!!!!!! Sess is right. She didn't look for him. And his identity was pretty obviouse. At least it should have been to her. I always smile when you post a new chapter. I imagine it may be a good long heart to heart. Maybe a little lemon. Or maybe a big one! LOL!! Don't keep us in suspense Darling!
the Entire time I'm reading all I kept thinking of was - holy ish. It's gonna cost a fortune by the time all the replacements are done. Good thing sess has long money
Mecca (Chapter 12) - Wed 06 Jan 2021
Oh man lol Drunk, belligerent with a penchant for breaking things Kagome is really not the best Kagome... You paint such a vivid picture, I loved their final confrontation, how she literally blew his disguise off just kinda cracks me up xD So glad the daiyoukai is outta the bag! Now they can get down to business - er, I mean, catch up ;)
Well that was explosive. However, it ended perfectly. Cant wait tonsee whats next
loved it, great chapter.
Ahhhh just read this on my lunch break! Love love love this story!!
Such a cliffhangerrrrr
Oh my gawd that cliffhanger!!! Please update soon!!
I'm starting to think you have a torture kink - bc that cliff hanger!!!!
OMG that was so much fun to read....... Tells you just how nieve Kagome is when she is not really putting 2 and 2 together.... LOL This chapter had it all loved the humor and I can't wait to see what happens next.... Update soon and Happy New Year....
Tilayha (Chapter 11) - Thu 31 Dec 2020
You are evil for ending this chapter that way lmao
Mecca (Chapter 11) - Thu 31 Dec 2020
You and your cliffys...! I'm hanging onto every word! Hahaha I nearly but just about lost it when I read "Milk Toast Danske"!! I about rolled outta my chair, that was hilarious! Could it be that next chapter is the one where he finally reveals who she's been boibling the night before...? I do have to admit it took me way too long to realize that "Shoma" is short for SesSHOMAru, but I never claimed to be a genius eheh... But once again, if you ever feel a bit of encouragement, just know you have a ton of us just hanging onto every word in every chapter you've bestowed us with. Happy New Year, Cougar!
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