I meannn I'm sure he could melt masika with his acid and no one would be the wiser >_>
Damn that was a great chapter loved it... I don't like Adel he should kill her when she least expects it using his dokuso to turn her body into a pile of goo. Now he left her in his home where she could plant devices and whatnot to get what she wants and use it against him... Best kill when he can Kagome always comes at the oddest of times wonder what she is thinking now.... Update soon.
Right choice, Big Dog! Tell her what that crazy bitch has over your head while you're explaining. My nosey ass wants to know. Somethin' up with that one. Trouble for sure!
why do I have a feeling that this woman is what placed that thing in Kagome
Oh sooo much drama all at once!!! How will I ever cope with such a cliffhanger?!!?? Lol do be a darling and treat us to another chapter soon?? I will be waiting
don't worry. .i have a lot of patience. im glad that you're back.. can't wait for their next journey. i hope no naraku in kagome's soul please.. just demon outside her mind or body. thank you fot comeback!
She should've told him. He should tell her. Damn! Watch out! Gonna be a big crash down the road!
Loved the chapter but disliked this Masika character seeing how she was bait to get to Sesshomaru and he fell hard... Damn now the witch found out about Kagome is plotting against him while Kagome tries to find out how to get rid of the jikininki boy she should not have lied to him who else can she talk to about this... Update soon....
Anna (Chapter 5) - Sun 21 Feb 2021
This is so good and well written, it could be made into a historical fantasy romantic drama movie... It's been so long since I read something so good..
Welcome back, friend! I enjoyed the update!
That was an amazing chapter, the voice in Kagome's head could have been from the dig where the evil tried to take over her? If so I wonder what it wants besides time and making Kagome go nuts... Hopefully, she lets Sesshomaru know or else things will start going from good to bad whereas demons tend to fuck with things.... Can't wait to read more update soon.
oh damn. what now
MISSED YOU! You called Dansk a digger! LMAO! Big smiles. Kinda like this vulnerable side to Sess and what is that creepy voice? Kagome pick up a hitch hiker from the dig site? The priestess possessed? That would be cool. It didn't seem to care for the Lord of the West. So what next? Can't wait to find out!!!
Yikes hopefully whatever was speaking to Kagome doesn't ruin things with sess
whew what a chapter! I hope sess pulls some strings to have Danske removed from the dig site. I also wonder if he'll continue doing the podcast now that he's found her.
how come i just found out this beautiful story?
it's well writen, like i read a novel book. i hope there will be a long story till they old. make the adventure together. it just wonderful, i really miss the story, just found out yesterday.
I am hooked. Didnt expect that reaction from Danske and I'm glad he actually showed some emotion. Seemed to really like her.
And DAMN your smut is great!
I never did like stuffing lol but I couldn't help but offer my thanks for this gem. I'm running out of good reads on this website and it was such a pleasure to find this one.
Natalie (Chapter 13) - Thu 14 Jan 2021
All I can say is wow just love this story! So many cliffhangers like what's with the relationship or why kagome is sick? So can't wait to read more.. Keep writing your great at it..????
You are a very versatile writer. I like how many of your stories have a different feel, writing style, and intensity. Though this fic took me a while to get into, I now check for updates every 3 days then every day afterward if none. This is not my fave rendition of Kagome but Shoma/Sess has a wonderful appeal. He is sweet and thoughtful, kinda OOC even his feudal era self where he seems more mischievous and playful than deadly or disparaging of conversation. However, I loved the suspense you built up and looked forward to when Shoma would finally reveal himself to Kagome although she beat him to the punch. It's wonderful that they were able to makeup and have makeup sex. Nice!
i do find it strange that Kagome became so out of control when she felt duped and betrayed by Sess. She faced off with Sess bearing a lot of aggression, but when the tables were turned, she was fragile and unable to bear up under Danske's justified tirade.
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