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SmilingFool (Chapter 46) - Thu 21 Jan 2021

Oh wow that was so cruel.....  But in a playful kind of way....  I loved it... Boy can't wait to see how they act outside the baths....  lol love the drama....

Update soon.

 


Yamagomori (Chapter 45) - Thu 21 Jan 2021

I'm so giggling in the dark like a little girl at this. Omg so steamy lol I really have enjoyed the story thus far. I love a strong Kagome and I adore this Sesshoumaru who is somewhere in-between a sadistic killer and completely ooc sparkle parade lol Do you have ideas for the next chapters? I can't wait!


Walter205 (Chapter 45) - Thu 21 Jan 2021

 This is the only type of grooming that should be happening in an Inuuyasha story. Well done on this steamy chapter, can't wait to see who ends up interrupting them this time. ;)


daapatemysoul (Chapter 45) - Wed 20 Jan 2021

God damn! That was... *fans self* Can't wait for more! 

and I imagine I'm not the only one who's super eager. For Kagome this relationship is still new but Sesshomaru has wanted her for 10 years. He's got to be dying with anticipation about Kags being willing to go all the way. 


Shastuhh (Chapter 45) - Tue 19 Jan 2021

Ohhhh, that was greatt, i cant wait to see whats next


Young Kagome (Chapter 44) - Tue 19 Jan 2021

Has there been a well balanced hanyo? Or are they saying they never can be? Who has actually tried to keep them wel balanced? Hanyou aren't the only ones that strive for more as we all know. Just because they're more likely to do so doesn't mean they will if given the opportunity to strive and be well cared for. I don't like what they're saying about them and I had hoped that Kagome would call out the hypocrisy. 


daapatemysoul (Chapter 44) - Mon 18 Jan 2021

When Satomi first appeared, I didn't care for her. But now I'm starting to really love her. I love how she started grooming Kagome- I instantly recognized that move and was overrun by how adorable and loving it was. She's truly accepted Kagome at this point and I love knowing Kags will still have a mom living in the past.


SmilingFool (Chapter 44) - Mon 18 Jan 2021

Ah man that totally bites...  Hopefully Kagome will have purebred pups if not then one will have to be made and I don't think Kagome will like that.  Love the fact Satomi is teaching Kagome the in's and our's about inu habits and traditions.


Walter205 (Chapter 44) - Mon 18 Jan 2021

 I kept waiting for the other shoe to drop at the end, like is she going to remove some of her hair or something? But you finished on a nice note and it's good to see the two of them bonding a little bit. Can't wait to see if Kagome reciprocates the gesture with a nice back massage or if they bathe each other next. 


Young Kagome (Chapter 43) - Mon 18 Jan 2021

Haha always my favorite to see the reactions! Please update soon! 


Tisha (Chapter 43) - Sun 17 Jan 2021

Love the update, i wanted to respond about your lemon. You should use your fight scene with Kagome as an example. Write what you feel comfortable with and let it flow naturally. I know you will do an awesome job. Still wanna know who was stalking Rin. 


daapatemysoul (Chapter 43) - Sun 17 Jan 2021

Every time you mention Kaori, all I can think of is my 5' tall, 95lb Japanese aunt named Kaori. So it's a bit tough to think of the character as being a demon, lol. 

Excellenf chapter, as always, and I can't wait to see more!  


Ovela (Chapter 42) - Sat 16 Jan 2021

Thanks for the bonus update! You don't need any advice on lemons. You're doing a great job with the build up with both Sess and Kags POV. Your portrayal of the passion is excellent without being crude or too romantic. You're setting a great medium tone that encorporates pure desire and their growing love. Quite steamy!!


SmilingFool (Chapter 42) - Sat 16 Jan 2021

Oh this was such a lovely chapter well done.....  Thank you for continueing the story I love it.....


daapatemysoul (Chapter 42) - Fri 15 Jan 2021

So. HOT!! No need to give advice on citrus, you're doing damn good already. You're hurting that perfect sweet spot of flowery language while still keeping things grounded and easy to follow. (I hate when lemons become so flowery that you can't even tell if they had sexual or not. ugh!) Can't wait for more!! 


Shastuhh (Chapter 42) - Fri 15 Jan 2021

Haha, gotta hate it when you're  having a moment and your mother interrupts it. 


Ovela (Chapter 41) - Fri 15 Jan 2021

Oh Lordy lord...  you do sexual tension with Sesshomaru so well! I even got a bit flushed!


Tisha (Chapter 40) - Thu 14 Jan 2021

Hmm, something wicked this way come. Inquiring minds want to know who was stalking Rin and hu AhUn did not since them. Can't wait for the next chapter. You are a very talented weaver and i cannot wait to see wheretl this goes.


Walter205 (Chapter 39) - Thu 14 Jan 2021

 Oh man, imagine if during the first pregnancy she produces a litter of children, let's say triplets, the first two are born full demon but the third is half demon. Then imagine the consequences if either Sesshomaru or Satomi immediatly either tried to or actually succeeded in immediatly striking down the half demon child right then and there? Would probably be a tad too dark for the attempt to succeed but imagine the rift if Satomi attempted, Sesshomaru stopped her, and the weakened Kagome witnessed the whole ordeal and realized what her mother in law had tried to do?


Mecca (Chapter 39) - Wed 13 Jan 2021

I very much enjoy Satomi's inner musings here, especially about when Sess was just a pup :) Thank you for the update! Curious to see what she's got up her sleeve regarding Kagome.


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