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Tisha (Chapter 26) - Wed 25 Nov 2020

Perfect. Well written it flowed wonderful to allow story to write itself just what i expected. Well done.


Shastuhh (Chapter 26) - Wed 25 Nov 2020

Hahaha. Sessh is gonna kickk his assss. 

It was a awesome chapter you did wonderful. Im glad that it worked out well for you. 

The important parts that you wanted to convey was there you did it lovely. 


Mary J Dolph (Chapter 25) - Wed 25 Nov 2020

I personally would like to see her best him in the spar. She'll probably need the support she would garner in the future with the win.


Shastuhh (Chapter 25) - Tue 24 Nov 2020

I would say do what you feel comfortable with writing, you can do like a half scene where you start it out then gloss over it. But you are the writer its your choice. 

 

Thanks for the update jt was a good chapter 


Tisha (Chapter 25) - Tue 24 Nov 2020

Love this story. I think the fight scene should be up to you and your muse. The story is moving well and it is not good to become frustrated and lose interest. There are a lot of stories that are awsome on Dokuga and never reach completion.


KidWasabi (Chapter 25) - Tue 24 Nov 2020

Hey girl! Do your best and give us a fight scene!! 


Most Unlikely Angel (Chapter 25) - Tue 24 Nov 2020

Firstly, I'm greatly enjoying this story. I pretty much binge read it when I first found it. Secondly, I think as such hype was placed on her fighting abilities which were generally glossed over as judo martial arts, This provides an opportunity to reveal to not only the characters but to the readers, what that really looks like. It's also an opportunity for you to broaden your writing scope. So give it a try and see how it goes. You may surprise yourself. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

 

 


SmilingFool (Chapter 25) - Tue 24 Nov 2020

OMG That was brilliant....  I loved it...  So the general thought Kagome would back down....  LOL boy I 'd hate to be him.....  Ouch purity burns would not feel to keen on yokai skin.....  LOL  Sesshomaru is just eating all this up .....  Yes let them battle....


Shastuhh (Chapter 24) - Sat 21 Nov 2020

2 chapters! yey! I love that Kagome is not being easily pushed around and that she is taking it in strides! I cant wait to see whats next for them! 


Sora-chan (Chapter 22) - Sat 21 Nov 2020

Kagome 1 

Satomi 0

This arc should be fun. Satomi is gonna love her, I just know it


Sora-chan (Chapter 21) - Sat 21 Nov 2020

Wow, well that was a kiss!


Sora-chan (Chapter 20) - Sat 21 Nov 2020

Yay I finally made it here, I actually started this story because I saw the art of the necklace, it's so pretty. Somehow it kept slipping under my radar and I'm so happy to have started reading


Sora-chan (Chapter 13) - Fri 20 Nov 2020

oh wow, I've been steadily reading through and I'm positively hooked. I really love how you take the known elements from the show/manga and then twist them just so with an explanation and I'm really here marvelling at all the nuance you've included. InuYasha's behaviours being from being spoilt and literally a human failing, more than a demonic upheaval. 

And now Kags is a miko-hanyou which makes sense!

This is a fun story and I'm hooked. Ok, I'll continue reading now.

Oh! I also love that all the chapter names start with R, thats clever and my brain appreciates it lol


Michelle (Chapter 21) - Wed 18 Nov 2020

I realy like your story all the chapters are very good keep up the good work :) looking forward to more:)

Is the cave where Inuyasha as been staying in was it the same one where Onigumo  was before he became Naraku ?


Shastuhh (Chapter 20) - Mon 16 Nov 2020

It was sooo perfect and the art!! Ohh it was sooo prettyyy


SammyJams (Chapter 20) - Sun 15 Nov 2020

So sweet!


SammyJams (Chapter 19) - Sun 15 Nov 2020

Loved this one so much! Hearing them finally have an honest, open conversation was so pleasing! Can't wait to see what happens next! Take care!


Shastuhh (Chapter 19) - Sun 15 Nov 2020

Awwh, its been good! Soo happpy for the updates! Thank you

I love that he finally opened up to her. It was looking scary there for a moment not gonna lie. 


Mecca (Chapter 15) - Thu 12 Nov 2020

I'm very much enjoying this so far! I do like how in character Sesshoumaru is so far, and how Bokuseno was able to shed some light, being the all knowing tree-sama :) I'm glad you added so many new chapters, I had left off at chapter 6 and was delighted to see there was 10 extra chapters I hadn't read yet!


Shastuhh (Chapter 16) - Tue 10 Nov 2020

This chapter was cute i loved it! All the fluff in it. I love getting to see his thoughts 


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