Reviews for A Jealous Betrayal by Utena

SmilingFool (Chapter 3) - Mon 19 Oct 2020

Not at all what I expected, but still a great chapter....  Kagome's friends didn't even do anything to the prick and they treat Inu Yasha like he did no wrong.... What backstabbing bitches....  Kagome could do without those who helped get the letter to Kagome.  Hopefully they find a way to get back to each other I wonder about the baby....  It would be a first yokai in her time without a cloaking device or tailismen.   Anyways update soon.


cassandra (Chapter 3) - Sun 18 Oct 2020

I’m loving this so far. I feel bad for them. I sucks about the well being destroyed. It would be awesome if there was a way to fix it!


Sora-chan (Chapter 2) - Fri 16 Oct 2020

this is so heartbreaking. why cant inuyasha leave well enough alone. hes so selfish!


Irish Lass (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Oct 2020

Just read both chapters today. I very much enjoyed them and I am looking forward to your next update.  


SmilingFool (Chapter 2) - Thu 15 Oct 2020

Such a great chapter wish it were longer...  Why doesn't anyone slap the hell out of the hanyo or purify him for what he's done....  I need some action....  


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Oct 2020

Very nice beginning to what seems to be a intriguing story.

I just don't know what Kikyo or Kagome ever saw in a brain dead knuckleheaded idiot like Inuyasha in the first place.  For him to do something so stupid as to what he did to Kagome is beyond comprehension.  He sure is going to regret what he did BIG TIME.  LOL

Who is going to keep Sesshomaru from beating him to hell once he finds out.  Run Inuyasha, Run for your life.  LOL

Can't wait for the next update...hope it's soon.

Very nice writing.

Cheers!!!

 


Ruth Gustafson (Chapter 2) - Thu 15 Oct 2020

Why is Inuyasha so think skulled? He just can see that they love each other, there has to be something behind it. Now I'm just hoping that she finds the present Sesshomaru and that he did do anything stupid like mate again thinking she was dead.


SmilingFool (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Oct 2020

Wow can't believe how much of an idiot he is...  To hate the one that did her best to help him to turn on her then push her down the well and destroy it...  What an ass I can't wait for Sesshomaru to kick, maim or kill the fool....  Hopefully they find a way to reach each other...  That would be too sad.

 

Update soon


jessica (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Oct 2020

Wow wow wow this is good like really good!!


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