wow... it's really good story. .. just great. .please write it till the end. .
Wow, this was crazy. Super dark but that reunion was sublime. But now the orderlie is possessed...? This was awesome in its darkness, love your writing!
Damn that was a great chapter.... Kagome's not out of the woods because she still has to kill people trying to get the jewel. The question is How is Naraku able to survive to leech off someone? Now that Miroku's reincarnation Hide is caring for Kagome would he by chance begin to have memories from his past that not even Kagome could explain if he were to tell her..... I wondered if she even knew the jewel was missing from her body. Now her son Tenshi (Angel, celestal being ect.) was born and carried the jewel within him only to bring it back to her because he could no longer look over it because of the taint. So how is Naraku interfering? And who is it he has taken over?
Can't wait.... Update soon.
I love the descriptions! Dark but realistic enough to be creepy.
Oh such a sad ending.... or is it.... Poor Sesshomaru to not know and losing time due to Naraku and knowing Naraku killed Kagome's family in his body.... Truly evil that one. At least in the end Sesshomaru felt free.
Oh boy, I wonder is the child is Sesshomaru's or is it also a part of Naraku then I could understand Kagome trying to kill it. I can't wait to read more
Update soon.
Wow that was so unreal..... Hell it reminded me of those good ol' horror flicks and I loved it.... Hopefully Kagome comes to her senses and heals and finds a way to cope with all that has happened... Great start for a first chapter....
Update soon.
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