So....I am obviously enjoying this story. I think what has me so engrossed are the phsycological aspects. I don't know if that was your intent, but for everyone to be so comfortable with random detached sex and to just function with regularity like its normal really speaks to the difference between how you have portrayed the demons mindset in this story. It brings a whole new focus and clearly highlights kagome as really outside of that norm as we see her struggle with feelings of attachment that Touga for example doesn't really seem to feel; she still has not really let go of Sesshoumaru either which has been pointed out more than once. I look forward to her growth and Sesshoumaru's as this chapter allowed him to see why she rejected him to a small extent. Take care and I look forward to your next update.
EC COUGAR!! HURRY BACK!! W are addicted to this wonderful tale you have spun!!! The ending was adorable!! Mabye he'll finally show his soft side to kags!!! And that position!! My goodness l, cant believe he stayed!!
Wow what a morning to wake up into... lol For some reason I knew Toga would get rid of her recliner and coffee table he never did like it and what better way to get rid of it through a storm.... lol Now is that Toga or is that Ryusaki that bothered to let themselves in.... Can't wait to find out.
Aaawww!!! I WONDER WHO IT IS!!! XD its def nice to have some side characters to turn up the story!! Lmao!! Cant wait to see what happens!! I eeally hope so.eone redoes her poor cabin and she figures out why the shrine is tainted!!
Aaawww!!! I WONDER WHO IT IS!!! XD its def nice to have some side characters to turn up the story!! Lmao!! Cant wait to see what happens!!
Miss C (Chapter 1) - Sat 05 Sep 2020
After the Touga part, I realized this story is not for me.
Wow that was a great chapter... Kagome meeting Sado Island had been a good move, although the shack could be turned into a cabin with a bit more modern living convenience thats suitible shrine maidens needed more than just the outdated four walled shack she was getting. I wonder what secrets she will unvail while exploring. It seems Sesshomaru really cares for Kagome but tries to distance himself from expressing his love who he believes has none. Nice chapter well done.
Oohh!!! Excited to see what happens!! Are they gonna get close??!!
D (Chapter 1) - Fri 04 Sep 2020
I love yhe relationship with Touga and Kagome. It seems so natural and beautiful done. I can't wait for the next chapter
Aaawwww!!! I kinda hope she stays with toga!!! Hheess ssoo sweet!!! Love it! Can't wait to read more!! I wonder how sess feels about her and his dad!!!
I am stingy with reviews, but that is out of laziness....... I should have given you multiple reviews long ago. This is a wonderful story. I appreciate you flushing out Kagome to provide more depth to her mental struggles. I honestly do not blame her for wanting nothing to do with Sesshoumaru after that kind of abuse....who would. I do understand however that loves doesn't turn off like a light switch. I also don't necessarily agree that screwing his father is healthy for her either but this is fan fiction so jack it all up to your hearts content. I do however enjoy the story and your ability to connect everyone together (although I will allow myself an out regarding Abe....she seems like a filler for Sesshomaru to have relations with since Kagome was having relations...I don't really see her overall relevance although I could have missed something regarding her earlier in the story). You are doing an amazing job and I look forward to each update. Thank you for sharing your talent.
This was a great chapter at least now Sesshomaru knows Kagome is moving on since he can't seem to give her what she wants and his father could wonder when she gets to the shrine its all about to crumble.... She can always ask for a jetted tub for her troubles and with her penchant for hotsprings. Anyways just had to add that in.... Maybe now things can get more steamy.... Update soon.
That was a great chapter hopefully Kagome will find what she is looking for and will finally be truly happy. Even after a year and nothing makes her happy perhaps she'll be able to take up her PA job again... Update soon.
OMG that was a wonderful chapter.... I loved it.. Especially when the girls came at the end to witness Kagome's excapade at the front door... lol it was funny how easily Kagome told them it was Sesshomaru's dad... LOL loved it.
Anjula (Chapter 12) - Wed 02 Sep 2020
This is such a neat fic. I really like the casual relationship T and K have going. It seems so comfortable and natural. I did clutch my pearls when it started tho lol. I'm so interested to see what happens when Sessh is back in the picture....sharing perhaps?
Pat Wim (Chapter 11) - Tue 01 Sep 2020
Kagome wow im usually on her side bud damn she a hoe right now
That was a nice chapter full of summer fun and Kagome go to see Shippo once more.... Inu Yasha knows about what the duo did and warned her of his habits... I don't think it will last long with Toga I think he's only for the challenge Kagome offered... Hn wonder what Sesshomaru is doing?
Update soon
Touga/Kansas are growing on me.....still feel weird about the pairing but excited to see Sesshomaru's reaction to the new events.
Update soon please ????
Aaawww!!! Thats such a great moment to have! I love the family moments!! Amd the relationship with touga and kags.. i feel like it cld def work!!
krynn (Chapter 11) - Mon 31 Aug 2020
Love it. Can't wait to read more
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