This was a very sexy chapter <3 I very much enjoyed it, though I do kind of wonder how Kagome hasn't gotten pregnant with all the unprotected sex she's had lol xD
Just one crit. Sake is a wine made from rice grains that are made into a mash and fermented to create a low alcohol percentage/proof beverage. Most are only in the 15% range (diluted) or 18-20% undiluted. Proofwise that means its as boozy and the least boozy liqueur.
Whiskies are made from grains such as corn, wheat, barley, rye etc. They are made into a mash then fermented, and distilled. Distillation removes impurities and increases the alcohol per volume/proof. Most whiskies run from40-68% alc/volume or 80-136 proof. Most don't get bottled that hight. 125 and 110 are common high proof ranges.
That being said, sake and whiskey are two very different things and take very different volumes to achieve drunkenness per individual.
D (Chapter 24) - Mon 28 Sep 2020
I am so in love with this story. This slow but not slow build to everything is just delicious. You do a wonderful job of character writing. I really enjoy the way you keep them true to themselves as you have written them but also do not rush or take 100 years for their development or decision making process. Its believable that they make that choice right than and there. The story just wonderful. I am on like pins and needle waiting to see what Touga has to say to both of them. I am guessing so hard if he just going to have one big talk altogether or do it in his round about way with them each individually. You keep me guessing and i love every minute of it.
Wow that was a great chapter, at least the dragon is not sucking the life out of her.... Kagome really does have a thing for inu's..... lol Anyways loved the chapter I can't wait to read more.
update soon
Hola me encantó el capítulo...y ya estoy pensando a futuro si el señor Dragón necesita un heredero al no tener un cuerpo físico tendría que habitar en uno?, Y quién podría ser la futura Madre?, Ya me imagino todo .. .la madre kag, y la guerra entre padre e hijo para ver quién es el cuerpo receptor y que hará también el Dragón con ese cuerpo?,estoy emocionada con la continuación....y una sola puede soñar...
Eliona (Chapter 22) - Sat 26 Sep 2020
You put so much depth into your story its so impressive, and its honestly refreshing to be able to be submerged into a story that has real thought put into it. I like how you gave the reason why Kagome is attached to her ugly coffee table, these little details really give you so much edge. Keep it up youre doing fantastic.
Omg!!! This is getting crazy!! Love it!! I wonder what theyve got planned!!
LOL That was fun to read, leave it up to the inu's to make a priestess pissed enough to do something stupid as pretend to bathe so she could talk to the dragon lord. Guess she got two answers to some of the questions she had. Hopefully it would be enough for now until the ritual can be complete. At least she knows the jewel is safe. How did the dragon know who she was? does he know that Sesshomaru has the jewel. Will he manipulate her to get it? Oh so many questions.... Loved the chapter update soon.
OMG just when it was getting good you stopped oh woe is me, woe is me.... lol
So the dragon sucked Kagome's life and was hoping to finish the job so he could unseal himself and wreck havoc on the world.... At least that's what I think.... Tell me I'm wrong... I love the story and the chapter was awesome I will have to read it over again it was just fun to read. Update soon.
Eliona (Chapter 20) - Thu 24 Sep 2020
Lol, I just love how that ugly coffee table still makes its way around in your story x'-D
Also, I really like your creativity in the almost possession like dream, very unique. Also interesting how time seemed to move differently in that dream world compared to real time. Awesome job :)
WWHHAATT??!!! I WONDER WHAT the demon is up too!! Whats gonna happen when she completes the ritual!! Keep up the great work! Loving that sessy is being more caring!!
That was a great chapter.... At least they are gettting along and hopefully Sesshomaru will help more with the shrine even make Kagome a willing partner....... Can't wait until you update...
Eliona (Chapter 19) - Thu 24 Sep 2020
So I binged your story in day and Im all caught up and can't wait for more! You are doing an amazing job, I love the true to character feel of Kagome and Sesshomaru, you captured their persona so well. Keep up the great work.
Throughly enjoy the setting for this story. Love the twists and turns of this story. Looking forward to updates.
Dang!! I wish this story had a few more chapters finished so i didnt haveta stop reading!! Quite addictive!! Loving the chars and story line! Keep up the great work!
Ooo that was a good chapter Sesshomaru trying to make amends and Toga giving advice wowit seems Kagome and Sesshomaru are hitting it off nicely. Poor Kagome always getting teased from Aiden and Ryu... lol good chapter can't wait until you update...
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