Reviews for Time Changes All by Shastuhh

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Elizabeth (Chapter 20) - Sun 13 Sep 2020

Excelente que regresaste!!! Gracias

Por favor acerca a Sessho y Kagome!!


SmilingFool (Chapter 20) - Sun 13 Sep 2020

OMG that was a great chapter I loved the crystals and the meanings....  Poor Kagome hopefully she won't get to overwhelmed.....  So many to choose from.  Can't wait to read the next chapter. update soon.


Elizabeth (Chapter 19) - Mon 24 Aug 2020

Excelente capítulo. Gracias!!!


Taylor (Chapter 19) - Mon 24 Aug 2020

Wonderful chapter! Glad they had that heart to heart 


Elizabeth (Chapter 18) - Mon 17 Aug 2020
Wow. Tu historia es genial!! A mi parecer va perfecta y ojalá estes muy bien y puedas seguir con ella. Gracias

ashley (Chapter 17) - Sat 15 Aug 2020

I really love this story!!! I hope that you find inspra for this and continue it, because it would be a lose to the fan fiction world.

 


Taylor (Chapter 18) - Sat 15 Aug 2020

Don't worry about cancelling the story if you have lost inspiration, writing should come from your own enjoyment not forced. Forcing it too much will just give you stress that you do not need, especially during a pandemic. If you gain your inspiration back eventually then I will look forward to what you put out, but take care of yourself first and foremost. 


Kris (Chapter 18) - Fri 14 Aug 2020

great chapter!  I liked Sesshomar's inner thoughts, how he wished for his superior senses to fail. lol


S4toonee (Chapter 18) - Fri 14 Aug 2020

I have enjoyed the story and I hope you do continue even if you have to take a break. I cannot offer inspiration because I really enjoy everyone's creative process/imagination. I will encourage.  Sometimes a break is needed to get a fresh perspective and clear the mind.


daapatemysoul (Chapter 10) - Sat 08 Aug 2020

I can't believe the Neko is named Yasu! I'm a designer and part of my field is furniture design. In college I designed and built a loveseat and named the design Yasu because it looked like boulders and a peaceful stream trickling by. I've never seen the name elsewhere. 

I love the story! 

 


susie (Chapter 16) - Mon 03 Aug 2020

here comes inuyasha and shippo!  are they bringing trouble?  gonna stir the pot?  i wonder how they'll be recieved, and what they're going to barge in on XD


susie (Chapter 15) - Sun 02 Aug 2020

aww, i love when inukimi takes kagome under her wing.  i also liked the way you described toga and the shoji screens as well.  its beautiful how they immortalize their inu culture XD


Taylor (Chapter 14) - Sun 26 Jul 2020

I like the longer chapters but do what makes the most sense for you! If longer owns burn you out faster then go with shorter or if it's easier to keep typing go with longer etc. 


SmilingFool (Chapter 14) - Sun 26 Jul 2020

Well that went well, a few errors but that's okay.  At least they finally got to the castle and met mother....  Question why say her name is Kumi instead of Kimi or Inu Kimi?  Always wanted to know that answer.  I wonder what the mother will dress her in....  I know she loves drama the more the merrier....  lol  great chapter..  update soon.


susie (Chapter 14) - Sun 26 Jul 2020

This is great!  I think its flowing just fine.  I love stories where they are travelling together, and western palace shenannigans are always a good time.  a festival sounds like fun.  can't wait to see what kind of trouble kagome gets herself into.  and i always enjoy getting to see Sesshoumaru's meddling mother.  i also wanted to say i like the way you discribe it when they can sense each others approach.  as far as length, i don't mind either way, just do what feels right to you!


Taylor (Chapter 9) - Wed 22 Jul 2020

YESS TINY KITTY


Kris (Chapter 13) - Fri 17 Jul 2020

Very sweet moment! I loved the line "So Kagome closed her eyes and did what she does best she lept and dived into the unknown." That is so true a her characte, a girl that wholeheartedly stepped into and accepted a magical world 500 years in the past with all the adventures that ensued. Love that they're getting together so quickly. 


SmilingFool (Chapter 13) - Fri 17 Jul 2020

Wow very nice chapter.....  I like emotions, and odd outbursts that you think you are thinking but say aloud now those are to watch out for.  Never know if they are good or bad but in any case combined with lust well its a party for two.  I enjoyed this chapter it was informative for Kagome and now she knows what to do...  Hopefully Sesshomaru or Kagome doesn't fall prey to scheming fiends. Anyways, update soon....


VS (Chapter 7) - Thu 18 Jun 2020

I don't believe you are too slow, the pacing of the story is just right!

I enjoyed reading about Kagome's observations and thoughts! Sesshoumaru seems to have a lot of sides that he's trying to hide from the rest, and I'm curious to find out what else there is to him! ;)

The background story to other youkai and their whereabouts was nice!


VS (Chapter 4) - Thu 18 Jun 2020

Sesshoumaru enjoyed every minute of Inuyasha's failure, that made me laugh! Though a joking Sesshoumaru? Hilarious! I love how he's paying attention to her mood and tries his best to make her laugh! Such a sweetie. LOL

 


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