Oh how divine was that... LOL OMG the nerve of some men.... Yeah, that one I can believe if it were a real situation which such things happen. Anyways I had fun reading this chapter way to go... Those poor flowers never knew what cut them..... Wonder what Sesshomaru is thinking now.... Way to go Kagome.
Question? She's out to ruin Taisho's because of the circumstances when she was younger to bring him down a notch for those transgressions against her family. Wouldn't he realize her scent is familar? Anyways, great chapter....
Update soon.
Buhahahha! This is going to be great! XD Good luck boys, you're going to need it.
This sounds like the beginning of a truly great story! I also smell the beginnings of a stormy romance between Kagome and Sesshomaro. Lol! He's not going to know what hit him!!!
VS (Chapter 4) - Sat 13 Jun 2020
Of course "her" was Kagome and I enjoyed this chapter immensely! You had me snickering all the time! ;) Kagome's come backs were always on point and in addition polite and fair too! I loved it!
"Assistance" is quite vague, pretty sure it was her intention to keep it like that, they are more like partners? Guess I will have to wait and find out!
Sesshoumaru's dumbfounded look was hilarious and I can't get over the fact how much Kouga enjoed that show! XD
Nice update!
VS (Chapter 3) - Sat 13 Jun 2020
Ugh, it's just as I stated in my previous review; Sesshoumaru is a brat! He was super rude and arrogant. Like what kind of statement is that even "It is important to make him understand, it is not everyday that this Sesshomaru reschedules for others." ??? Last I checked it was him who wanted a meeting in the first place! And come on, really Sesshoumaru? You didn't even shake his hand? Tsk.
Haha, you have me all riled up here! A nice chapter and I can't wait to find out about "her" ;)
VS (Chapter 2) - Wed 10 Jun 2020
Hello,
your outline seems very interesting so far. CEO Sesshoumaru is a very popular trope and I'm sure you will be able to pique the interest of quite some readers. Sesshoumaru seems like a total brat! XD He is used to being on top of the food chain, it will be good for him to finally have a real competition that will be able to knock him off his pedestal. I'm curious about Kagome and how you will introduce her. Though I'm pretty sure she will be the opponent? That ought to be interesting and their dynamic will keep the story entertaining.
That being said I thought to let you know that I felt a bit confused at the beginning. I really like your summary it sounds original and different. That's refreshing. I didn't expect to read two chapters of CEO Sesshoumaru POV though. At least not after that summary. LOL
Have fun writing the next chapter! I'm looking forward to it.
You have my intrest. I'm excited to see how much trouble a woman who might be his equal will put him thru.
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