Reviews for Soul Mates by mythicamagic

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Nicki (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Jun 2020

This is so good!!! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out! 


Smittee (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Jun 2020

This story is so close to something I've been looking for. Something really hard to find. Keep it up. ^.^


Nicole (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Jun 2020

T.T why is this so good?! Holy moly, that build up though! Very much looking forward to the next chapter!


Faith (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Jun 2020

Well I certainly don't mind an extra part to this. LOL


Lauren (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Jun 2020

Well that was the exact opposite of what they planned. LOL Will you have Kagome leave for three years? Will Sesshomaru be able to use the well? Or will he have to wait? That'd be terrible...

 

It's okay. The first chapter covered a lot, but to stop only a handful of episodes in, it can't really be expected that you'd fit two thirds of the series into one additional chapter. A third installment makes more sense and reads as less rushed. 

 

 


bookgirl813 (Chapter 2) - Sat 13 Jun 2020

Excellent!  Still fighting the pull, but not quite.  Hmm, I wonder what happens next!


Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Jun 2020

Very cool so far. 
the pace is good, cutting through the original story builds the plot.
excited to see the next chapter !!  


Lillmaru (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Jun 2020

I hope this story has a happy ending.  I'm surprised you've planned this as a two shot.  I would think you'd need more than one chapter to wrap this up.


Kay (Chapter 1) - Tue 09 Jun 2020

I love it!! it's soo well written with every thought and moment soo clear!! 


Drosselmeyer (Chapter 1) - Sun 07 Jun 2020

LOVE the take on this trope, Myth. Very unique and very well done. I love how we seem them begrudingly getting closer through the realization that this is happening to them and Sesshoumaru's struggle with what it means. Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope you're doing well! <3


Lauren (Chapter 1) - Sun 07 Jun 2020

This is a very different take on a somewhat overused trope and I love it. Weaving your story into the existing one without taking too many liberties makes the story flow easily, and makes it read as normal. It's predictable but your take on their interactions through/because of the normal progression is fun


bookgirl813 (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Jun 2020

Wow, I really liked how you wove the whole soulmates idea into the canon. Well done!

it also appears that Sesshomaru isn't really positive he wants the connection severed. It's like whene Kagome touched him his subconscious reveled in the contact.  

I look forward to the 2nd half! 


Nicki (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Jun 2020

Wow! I love this story! It is so well written and the plot is great! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Please update soon!


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