Very well written. You have a great talent for condensing large periods of time without it feeling rushed. To have 4 years over 3 chapters without the relationship development feeling fake or rushed. I greatly enjoyed reading this story. It made me wish to be a fly on the wall of their life.
Ahh jeez, another goddamn masterpiece. Your talent knows no bounds when it comes to this pair. You make every coupling seem fresh, every plot so poignant and touching. Loved the ending. I quite liked how you applied the shipper goggles toward the end there, and adding Kagome's death as one of the catalysts for Sesshoumaru to decide to want to be with her, since he felt what it was like to be without her, and he didn't like it whatsoever. The three year stretch was good for them both, although I am wondering, was that Sess in the future real or part of her imagination? The way I took it was that he was real, letting her know he survived but that it meant she got back to him somehow? Either way, it was beautiful. All of it. Once again, thank you. Also I'm curious to see what else you've got cooking as you mentioned you have more fanfics in the works??? You've gotta set up a kofi account or something. I would so pay you to write with my measly earnings! Take care and be safe.
Niomi (Chapter 3) - Wed 24 Jun 2020
Thank you for such a sweet, beautiful love story. It was fantastic. An adventure. Every character was in point, you paint scenes well and the transition through time was unique to your story line. Of course we wish for more but this was great! These were no short chapters. can't wait to read more of your other creations
Oh Dee (Chapter 3) - Tue 23 Jun 2020
Though only three chapters, this story was very fulfilling. It was beautiful. I couldn't help but be pulled back and forth with Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Thank you for sharing.
amoanime (Chapter 3) - Tue 23 Jun 2020
Absolutely brilliant story!! I can see why some readers would request a multi chapter story (I felt the same about 'White Dresses'), but the three arc one shot ended perfectly to satisfy; and we can use our imagination for the rest. Now to patiently wait for a Macaria update until your next new story : )
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Tue 23 Jun 2020
This was so freaking cute! No need to continue the story at all.
loved how simple it was and how you intersected the show with your story!
Faith (Chapter 3) - Tue 23 Jun 2020
Thanks for finishing it despite your distraction. I'm content with this as a short story though it could be expanded it doesn't need to be. I'm looking forward to seeing what your upcoming story will be!
This was such an interesting and great read. Loved how you incorporated many of the things that happened in the anime, but twisted it enough so that it fit seamlessly. I enjoyed this tremendously. Thank you for sharing!
I love it! I honestly like that its not a big chapter stoy its simple and fluffy and its just the best! Im happy I got to read it. :)
I loved the last chapter! I have no problem with it ending so soon. I appreciated getting to the good stuff sooner and not having to deal with so much angst. it was a perfect ending.
Koree (Chapter 2) - Fri 19 Jun 2020
I know you said this was a 2part possibly 3 but this makes for a longer... really good story lol
Storm (Chapter 2) - Thu 18 Jun 2020
Oh great,
Now i need to get laid ????
Niomi (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Jun 2020
Definitely not complaining about the extra chapter! There are a lot of soul mate stories out there but none quite like yours, and so well written. I love how you startrd the story from the beginning. Following the original plot but with your own twist. It's refreshing! can't wait to see the final. I hope they find some love for each other, or the beginning of something at least. They sex must but mind blowing hot if they can feel each other! My gosh
Neelixonee (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Jun 2020
i also agree, there's so much that can be done here! Definitely more chapters!
Neelixonee (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Jun 2020
Oh damn! She left HIM?! What a great story. Sharing all the feels could definitely be a curse, and a blessing.
Mecca (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Jun 2020
Excellent take on this trope, you manage to make it seem fresh and adding your unique touch to it... *chef's kiss* I love how stubborn and feisty Kagome is in response to the situation, but like anyone, it'd be incredibly hard to resist the pull toward such an incredibly sexy demon like Sesshoumaru... Maybe Sess is taking advantage and thinking he will just have his fun and go about his business afterward, but I don't quite think it's going to turn out that way as sexy encounters such as what they had can be quite addicting... plus I'm sure his possessive side will rear its ugly head even more after all that ;) Can't wait to read the next installment!
Orotami (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Jun 2020
I'm so incredibly glad you haven't ended this yet. Fingers crossed its 6 chapters or more. We need more of this. Its incredible and I dont want to see it stop. Till next time!
ponpiri (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Jun 2020
Drag this story out! It can't just be three chapters long, it's too good!!
I. Love. This! You are amazing! Keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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