Reviews for Healing Her Heart by Nile

teresa daniel (Chapter 6) - Thu 07 May 2020

WHY THE HELL DID SANGO TELL HIM WHERE KAGOME MIGHT BE...DIDN'T SHE KNOW HE WOULD GO AFTER HER AND KAGOME COULD GET HURT OR KILLED FOR LEAVING HIM...ESPECIALLY WITH KIKYO PULLING HIS STRINGS. WITH KAGOME BECOMING A DEMON SO QUICKLY SHE MIGHT BE FULLY TRAINED BY THE TIME KIKYO AND INUYASHA GET THERE. IF KAGOME TRAINS WITH SESSHOUMARU ALL DAY AND MOST OF THE NIGHT FOR THE NEXT 2 TO 3 DAYS WITH BOTH WEAPONS AND HER MIKO AND DEMON POWERS SHE COULD KILL KIKYO EASY BECAUSE KIKYO ONLY USES BOW AND HER POWERS. KAGOME USES BOW BUT SHE CAN ALSO TRAIN IN SWORD OR DUAL SWORDS AND SAI'S LIKE (ELECTRA) AND ALSO THROWING DAGGERS AND STARS THOSE WOULD BE SOME EASIER WEAPONS TO TRAIN WITH AND EVEN A BATTLE FAN THAT SHE COULD USE WITH HER MIKO AND DEMON POWERS.....SESSHOUMARU COULD GET SWORDS , SAI'S , DAGGERS , THROW STARS , AND BATTLE FANS MADE BY TOTOSAI. HE WOULD JUST HAVE TO  SEND PROBABLY 4 FANGS TO GET IT ALL  DONE... TOTOSAI CAN GIVE THEM ALL  SPECIAL  ABILITIES TO USE WITH BOTH HER DEMON AND MIKO POWERS. SHE CAN MAKE.... BARRIERS,,,USE SUTRA'S AND OFUDA'S,,,MAKE KOTODAMA ENCHANTED NECKLACES,,,THROW BALLS OF MIKO POWER ,,,BREAK OR MAKE SEALS TO SEAL THINGS,,,HIDE HER SCENT,AURA AND POWER WITH A BARRIER OR A SPELL,OR ENCHANT AN ITEM TO HIDE THEM,,,SHE COULD MAKE AN INVISIBILITY BARRIER,, TO HIDE HER BODY  HER SCENT,AURA AND POWER ALL IN ONE BARRIER...CALL IT A CONSEALMENT BARRIER....DOESN'T SESSHOUMARU HAVE BARRIERS,SPELLS AND ENCHANTMENTS TO HIDE HIS PALACE AND TO PREVENT PEOPLE FROM ENTERING HIS PALACE AND GROUNDS...A DEMON WITH AS MUCH POWER AS HE HAS MUST HAVE MANY DIFFERENT THINGS TO KEEP IT HIDDEN FROM ENEMIES . HIS MOTHER LIVES IN A HIDDEN FLOATING PALACE WITH GROUNDS...IT EVEN MOVES TO WHERE SHE WANTS IT TO GO, A TRAVELING PALACE. I CAN'T BELIEVE KAGOME LET INUYASHA DO THAT TO SHIPPO..SHE NEEDS TO SEND SOMEONE TO GET SHIPPO,HE'S LIKE HER SON. SESSHOUMARU SHOULD GET SANGO, MIROKU AND KILALA TO JOIN HIS GROUP , IT WILL ALSO HELP KAGOME GET BACK TO NORMAL QUICKER. I CAN'T BELIEVE INUYASHA DESTROYED THE WELL SHE CAN'T GO HOME NOW FOR SURE...KAGS IS SO INTELLIGENT AND KNOWS SO  MUCH ABOUT THE FUTURE AND IT'S INVENTIONS THAT SHE WOULD BE CONSIDERED A GENIUS. SHE KNOWS ABOUT WAR AND STRATAGIES,LANGUAGES MANY IN THIS TIME SPEAK 4 TO 8 LANGUAGES EASILY. SHE COULD USE THAT TO HELP WITH FOREIGN TRADE OR TREATIES,SHE KNOWS MANY INVENTIONS LIKE WINDMILL POWER,TO GET WATER TO FIELDS FASTER FOR CROPS,DIGGING WELLS FOR WATER,BETTER WAYS TO BUILD HOUSES ADDING INDOOR PLUMBING,BATHTUBS,SHOWERS, WALK-IN-CLOSETS, KITCHEN CABINETTES,PANTRY FOR CANNING VEGETABLES,PRESERVES,PICKLES,FRUITS...FASHION-CLOTHING STYLES,HAIRSTYLES,JEWLERY.HOW TO MAKE YOUR OWN SHAMPOO,CONDITIONER,LOTION OR OIL TO SOFTEN SKIN,TOOTH BRUSH AND PASTE. HOW TO COOK A LOT OF DIFFERENT FOODS FROM DIFFERENT CULTURES. HOW TO USE FLOWERS,HERBS AND SPICES TO MAKE THINGS LIKE MEDICINES OR FOR DIFFERENT TREATMENTS.START A SCHOOL TO TEACH READING,WRITING,ENGLISH,MATH,SCIENCE JUST TO NAME A FEW....SHE WILL ALSO HAVE KNOWLEDGE OF THINGS THAT WILL COME TO BE WORTH A LOT OF MONEY IN THE FUTURE LIKE ART,WEAPONS AND THINGS FOR MUSEUMS,POTTERY,JEWELRY.DIFFERENT THINGS A BLACKSMITH CAN MAKE ,TRADE WITH OTHER COUTRIES AND KNOW WHAT TO TRADE FOR.KNOW WHERE TO BUY LAND AND WHAT TO INVEST IN FOR THE FUTURE.SO MANY THINGS SHE KNOWS TO LEAD THE DEMONS INTO THE FUTURE  AND MAKE THEM PROSPEROUS.EVEN ENCHANT JEWELRY TO HIDE DEMON FEATURES , IF THEY WANT TO HIDE THEIR DEMON ATTRIBUTES IN THE FUTURE.THEY CAN USE SPELLS AND OR BARRIERS TO HIDE THERE POWER USAGE.ON PROPERTY,HOMES,DOJO,OR BUILDINGS..........................TDAN


Koritsia (Chapter 6) - Sun 03 May 2020

Thank you for updating 


Desiree Nickels (Chapter 6) - Sun 26 Apr 2020

Please update soon


teresa daniel (Chapter 6) - Sun 19 Apr 2020

GREAT FANFIC SO FAR ....I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE....I HOPE SESSHOUMARU AND KAGOME KILL INUYASHA AND KIKYO........KAGOME DESERVES TO GET HER REVENGE ON BOTH OF THEM....AND SHE SHOULD NOT FEEL THE LEAST BIT GUILTY FOR TAKING HER REVENGE AFTER EVERYTHING THEY DID TO HER. SHE DESERVES SO MUCH BETTER THAN INUYASHA....SHE IS BETTER THAN KIKYO AND SHE NEEDS TO SEE THAT SHE ISBETTER AND NOT A COPY....IF ANYONE IS A COPY IT'S KIKYO...BECAUSE SHE NOT EVEN REAL OR EVEN ALIVE....KIKYO IS MADE OF GRAVE YARD DIRT, CLAY,ASHES, (BECAUSE HER BODY WAS BURNES TO ASHES, REMEMBER).AND AS FAR  AS HER BEING KIKYO'S REINCARNATION...I PERSONALLY NEVER BELIEVED THAT,,,JUST BECAUSE KAEDE SAID THAT DOES NOT MEAN IT IS TRUE. I ALWAYS THOUGHT SHE LOOKED A LOT MORE LIKE MIDORIKO THAN KIKYO.MIROKU AND MYOGA THE FLEA BOTH EVEN SAID THAT IN THE SERIES. KIKYO HAD MUD BROWN EYES ,STRAIGHT MEDIUM BROWN HAIR,WAS VERY TALL AND SKINNY WITH NO CURVES,LONG SKINNY NOSE.......KAGOME HAD BLUE EYES I THINK,BUT SHE HAD WAVY BLACK HAIR/ NOT BROWN...SHE IS SHORT,PETITE,WITH LOTS OF CURVES,      (TINY WAIST, NICE SHAPED HIPS, ASS,LEGS,  BIGGER BOOBS THAN KIKYO THOUGH)....SO SHE REALLY DID NOT LOOK LIKE KIKYO AT ALL IN MY OPINION....BUT SHE DID LOOK LIKE A YOUNGER MIDORIKO...................WELL GOTTA GO......UPDATE LOTS MORE CHAPTERS SOON...........................PLEASE.................TDAN

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

)....SO THE RESEMBLANCE TO KIKYO WAS REALLY NOT MUCH AT ALL


Lia (Chapter 6) - Sat 18 Apr 2020

I'm seriously questioning Sango's intelligence, not to mention her friendship to Kagome. I understand losing her temper and mouthing off about how she could beat Inuyasha and kill Kikyo. It's not very strategic to warn him if she truly intends to do it, but as a threat to make him shut up and stay away from them it works. But why did she tell him where to look for Kagome?! Sesshomaru would have been the last person he thought of if she hadn't opened her big mouth. Her abused friend finally gets away and hides, you'd think she'd be glad and just say they hadn't seen her. But no, Sango cuts out all the other places he would have wasted time looking for her first, tells him who would have her, and then explains why! All so she could rub it in his face? What kind of person tells an abuser where their victim is? I wouldn't even do that to someone I hated let alone my friend. 

  I'm a bit confused by Kikyo's plans and motivations. Her goals of wanting what should have been hers in life and wanting to take him to hell contradict each other. And why won't Kikyo need the spell anymore if he gives her the pup? Inuyasha mated Kagome before it because he actually had feelings for her. He only abused Kagome after Kikyo bespelled him, so won't he be horrified about what he did to Kagome and blame Kikyo after she takes it off? Even if she uses the pup as a hostage, is she going to hold it 24/7 to keep him from just taking it and running? And why would he agree to go to hell with her and leave his kid an orphan? 

  Despite wanting to slap the stupid out of Sango and thinking Kikyo's plans make no sense (I guess she's crazy as well as evil), I really like this story. I like the idea behind Sesshomaru taking her away, Kagome turning demon (usually  I don't but it's good in this), the changes you've made in backstory, and especially everything in the scene with Sesshomaru's extended family. I'm excited to read the next chapter. Hopefully Sesshomaru will speed up the mating.


Koritsia (Chapter 5) - Thu 09 Apr 2020

Keep up the good work on your story. I wonder what Inu Yasha will do. He should've noticed that Kagome was gone now. And will Sango, Miroku and Shippo return? 


Zauberer di Vent (Chapter 5) - Wed 08 Apr 2020

Poor little thing, you can make her feel better Sesshoumaru, cuddle time!!

Or puppy time, have some time to play with pups might help her. 


Haven Himori (Chapter 4) - Mon 06 Apr 2020

Can't wait for the next chapter


LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 4) - Fri 03 Apr 2020

This is so good


Koritsia (Chapter 4) - Thu 02 Apr 2020

Good story, keep up the good work


Zauberer di Vent (Chapter 4) - Wed 01 Apr 2020

Way to go Sesshoumaru!!

 


Lorena (Chapter 3) - Sun 29 Mar 2020

Im glad you did this, i always have a bone to pick when ppl have Kagome uneducated in table etiquette- Demon politics and such? Naturally,  but not this... What type of demon will she become? Is her tail black because of her hair color or because of her breed ? 


SammyJams (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Mar 2020

happy that they are going to get along well- can't wait to read more!


Mary J Dolph (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Mar 2020

Okay I may sound mean but I want kinkyho to get raped in front of inuyasha and beat to real death and for inuyasha to get the same then have sesshomaru resurect him!! If you can't tell I'm a former victim and I have wonderful torture ideas for men specificall. I would tell you now but some may be offended. Looking forward to more good story so far.


Lorena (Chapter 2) - Thu 26 Mar 2020

How interesting!  I hope to read more soon. I'd love to read how Sesshomaru will handle all this,  I'd like Inuyasha to suffer more than a quick death or punishment


nicole (Chapter 1) - Tue 24 Mar 2020

Updated please longer chapters


Shanika (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Mar 2020

Whew child. .... that's some strong shit.....why is she letting him treat her like that? Like wth? Kagome is an annoying person but she wouldn't let Noone tear her down 


Mecca (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Mar 2020

Holy shit, I want to murder Inuyasha in this story!  Please update soon! I would really like to know what happens next! 


Curly Elephant (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Mar 2020

Thank you for your story. It is very heart wrenching and I eagerly await the next part. ????


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