I was lying on my bed, reading ch12. then, all of a sudden, the story ended with a pharagraph
" 'This woman is stirring something within me. I am pleased with this feeling. I think, I want to feel whatever this is for much longer.’ It would take Sesshomaru some time to put a finger on it. When he did, he would be sure to find a way to never lose it. "
I immediately curled up in my bed with my phone in my hand and shouted:" Oh COME ON!! " Seriously though, why oh whyyyy did you have to hold it off on a CLIMAX!?!?!
Great story, keep it coming.
I've always enjoyed this story I just never found a chance to review it until now. I love it whole heartedly and can not wait for the next chapter.
katie (Chapter 6) - Tue 12 Apr 2011
wow that is so good please keep going u are doing a great job dont give up and keep at it
Anni (Chapter 4) - Sat 25 Apr 2009
Ooooh!! VERY interesting! Keep going! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! :D
U need 2 UPDATE this story is so sad so vry very sad
katie (Chapter 4) - Sat 25 Apr 2009
wow i like it please keep going
stars (Chapter 4) - Sat 25 Apr 2009
please updata
katie (Chapter 3) - Fri 24 Apr 2009
wow i like it please keep going
l33t (Chapter 3) - Thu 23 Apr 2009
Smittee!!! I'm finally reviewing! Though I'm not sure why I haven't found this story before, I'm glad I came across it. I remember in the first chapter when I thought it was Sess with Kagome, I was like, "How could you do that?" Sad face. But then I realized about two seconds later that it wasn't him. Yay! ...or not, since I don't particularly like the position poor Kagome is in. Sad face. Anyway, I like the darkness to the story with Naraku and how Kagome can't leave him because of Kagura. Nice twist.
Wow this is a good story. A very good dark story, and an interesting and original idea. I'm already wondering how it'll spin off (and how I would spin it off, lol).
stars (Chapter 3) - Thu 23 Apr 2009
updata please
its dark but i like it alot, i cant wait tos ee more
Yay! Sess and family to the rescue! Can't wait for the next update.
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