A wonderful and steamy one-shot! I loved it, thank you.
This was so good. I can imagine this being the closest to how they would interact in the canonverse, but a drunk Sesshomaru is a tad hard for me to imagine, but I figure if anyone could drive him to it, it'd be Kagome. The fact that he was unable to cross that line due to literally centuries of thinking otherwise I'm sure would effect his very nature, but Kagome is enough to shake his reality up. If we take into consideration how they both interacted in canon, they were civil (except the first few encounters), but then he began rescuing her, and was so bothered when she called out to him "big brother." If only! Hehe. Love all your stories, susie! Keep em comin' (literally and figuratively) ;)
Not bad. I liked it for the most part. Trope I didn't like was the "unleashed his demon speed" when going at it from behind (a little overused, but no real literary sin). I was a bit uneasy his method to "crossing the line" was to make her break her conviction and once more put affection first before receiving it. He doesn't actually put his pride away, and admit to it and start it. That's the only thing that really kind of bothered me.
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