This reminds me of the song Forever Young by Alphaville ;_; I'm going to go cry for an hour now.
You know the stuck tears that need to come and won't? That's where I'm at right now. I liked this. It's hard to read, and there's an emptyness in knowing Sesshoumaru is gone, but it works despite the sadness. Well done!
Aaaaand now I'm destroyed. lol
I really, really liked this. It's a unique concept and take on things. Kagome's newness and inexperience come through well, and I like how Sesshoumaru's thoughts were wrapped around things and how it led to him letting her down gently. Very nice read!
Loved it. Though it was short, with the brief description you can just imagine how and when it could have happened. You did and awesome job. Ever think about a sequel?
Toni (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Dec 2019
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