you had to leave it there. i hope you updated very soon. i want to know what happens.
OMG, I am so excited for the next chapter. I hope Kagome gains some form of sanity, after what she has been through
Koree (Chapter 6) - Tue 14 Jan 2020
Great story
Koi (Chapter 6) - Tue 31 Dec 2019
Oh wow! I wonder how Kami plays into this, and why was sesshy so worried?! Interesting, can't wait until the next chapter! Amazing story!
I am loving the direction of this story. At first I was skeptical, as I usually stay away from stories of abuse. However, this one was a little different and I'm glad I stuck around. Looking forward to more!!! Keep up the great work!
Wooooow this is a lot to unpack o_o. Sesshomaru is definitely crazy, especially since the littlest thing sets him off. Her stepdad has been in her life for ten years so I'm guessing she never fell down the well. Wich makes me really wonder why Sess is even bothering with her.
Koi (Chapter 4) - Sun 29 Dec 2019
Ooh what a lovely chapter! Can't wait until th next chapter!!
I remember this story of old that you deleted. Like you, per your Chapter 1 author's note, I wasn't sure where the old story was going. The old story was rather disjointed in conveying Sesshomaru's thoughts and actions in a way that was understandable to the reader. This version of the story is keeping to a similar timeline of happenings in the white room, but it more presisely gives the readers a view of Sesshomaru that is more complete. I had read the old version several times, so I remember most of it, and I look forward to the next 6 chapters or so to see how they compare to the old version and what you will now write. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Keep up the great writing! :)
possessive sesshomaru is so badass
Julie (Chapter 4) - Sun 29 Dec 2019
I hope you update real soon. like tomorrow. love the story so far.
Ugh! Let the man talk! I really want to know why he gought her. But no Kagome had to keep interrupting. Now I have to wait and hope that we find out in the next update.
Well this is dramatic o_o. I wonder why he 'bought' Kagome or even learned of her. Was her step-father Naraku?
Toni (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Dec 2019
just read your story so far.
interesting take.although I was thinking her buyer was Naruku.
curious to see why he bought her?
looking forward to more chapters
please update soon
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