wow i love this already i dont know what all the technical words for this is but i love the plot to this awesome!!!!!

That was a cool chapter to bad they didn't tell her about the chip beforehand..  Even still the chip could be removed when she is done with the guild and her quest to become stronger...  Go Kagome, she's excited RPG's wonder how that would feel to live in such a place...  Loved the update.

Wow at lest now Kagome doesn't have to hide from them.  but she does have to be careful who spies her information or puts two and two together.  That was cool Kinda reminds me of SAO (Sword Art Online)  Got into it watching how indivuals grew in rank then some become guilds and work their way up the towers.  Each time they'd go online into a game they'd take up one of those characters to choose from from human to monster each having their own personal window pop-up showing them stats and statistics even answers to questions reguarding quests, lands etc.  So I am kind of hooked on this story.  update soon.  

Wow that was a fun chapter. I enjoyed reading this one at least now she'll  be herself.  I'm glad she made it into the guild.  

Love the story update at least now Luna's papa knows what happened in her last life and the power she now weilds is much stronger.  Can't wait to see what she will do next.

I truly love this story and I'm sending my love to you hun!

I thank you for updating...  I truly love this story.  I know how depression can affect a person in many ways.  Just know we care.  Until next time Update when you can.

I'm glad you came back I was looking for this story

Aww, I'm glad the story takes on its course again. I think you would like to hear some thoughts from me. I hope this could help you cultivate your story more toward what you envision it. So This is my personal opinion; too much of other pov like Deo's and Deacon's feels redundant for the story line. And reading from their perspective makes me think of them as having the same personality as luna. in which I'm sure that was not your intention (or was, idk, I mean it's your story). I'd like to suggest that this story keeps using mainly Luna's POV and not change pov too much in span of just several chapters when I feel that the story havent even progressed towards it's main conflict. I dont wanna sound like a know it all. I enjoy your work and would love to read more from it in the future ??. thanks 

Is this just me? I can't seem to pronounce the name of the empire ????????. but this 3 chapter had me cracking up real good. I love it! Thank you for the awesome work! 

I will admit,  this chapter was a bit hard to read. It's mostly due to the rehashing information that I just read. But once I got thru that (I read it all) it flowed well. Now when will we be seeing the man of the hour?

Honestly really love this! Please update soon!

Love it. Interesting concept putting her in a Novel. Can not wait for next chapter.

I love this story and I can't wait for your next update 

Awesome! Im excited to read more!

Nice story! Wish you could come out the next chapter faster. Tq

Please update soon, I'm loving this so far!!

Please update soon, I'm loving this so far!!

I love the concept of your story and would love for you to keep it up.

That being said, I think you need to watch your grammar. You need to insert some commas and remove some apostrophes.

Other than that, it's great.

I have been waiting for these xddddd 

Cant Cant for more