Reviews for The Practice Girl by susie

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Michele_Lei (Chapter 101) - Sun 30 May 2021
Oh so sweet, cute, and very romantic! I think drabbles are wonderful and whimsical. It must have been so hard to restrict yourself to 100 words at a time. I feel like this story didn’t showcase as much of your usual sass and descriptiveness, though. Still very cute and sweet even though a little predictable, but the end did surprise me. I got to the 100th chapter and wonder how is she doing the lemon scene in 100 words? Oh....because there is no lemon. I hope it’s okay if I add this. I believe you actually meant to use the word “immerse”. This story and “Only Human” used the word “amerce” which means punish with a fine. I applaud you for adopting a different technique. I believe it’s quite challenging and you were very successful.

Demonlordlover (Chapter 88) - Sun 25 Oct 2020

Drabbles are lovely - small conversations can convey so much more than two paragraphs of descriptions sometimes.  I clicked through them swiftly - and that is a good thing.  I liked their interactions.  :)


aries_heart (Chapter 101) - Thu 23 Jan 2020

i loved every second of it.

There was a smile on my face the entire time reading.


Lauren (Chapter 101) - Sat 09 Nov 2019

This was such a cute, quick, fic. They were both adorable and open and it was sweet that Sesshomaru wanted to trick Kagome like that.


Mecca (Chapter 11) - Fri 08 Nov 2019

Oh my god, what an adorable idea for a fic :D I can just picture this scene, Kagome like, "Damn. You are good, Sesshomaru! Got me, haha" wooo! 


Redleopord (Chapter 101) - Wed 06 Nov 2019

Really cute story. Sorry it is over. Great job!!


(Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Nov 2019
Muchas gracias por las amables palabras! Estoy tan feliz de que disfrutes mi trabajo. Estoy desconsolado cuando los buenos autores tampoco terminan sus historias, por lo que mi objetivo es nunca dejar a nadie colgado ... aunque ahora entiendo lo difícil que puede ser seguir una trama. No tuve mucho tiempo para abordarlo, pero creía que Inuyasha estaba irritado porque Sesshoumaru comenzó a salir con Kagome, pero lo aceptó de mala gana cuando vio lo feliz que la hacía, y que continuó mostrándole su respeto. ¡Muchas gracias por el apoyo! ¡Espero que sigas disfrutando de mis historias!

Sandra sirake (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Nov 2019

Hola,no tengo más que decir que me encantó muchísimo está  historia,peroooo...., Me quedé con las ganas de saber que dice Inuyasha de todo esto, te doy un GRACIAS, enorme también xq eres una de las muy pocas autoras que escribe genial y además termina sus historias así que gracias y continua que están hermosas tus historias las sigo a las dos que por ahora tienes y espero con ansias la tercera


sesshykagslvr (Chapter 101) - Tue 05 Nov 2019

I honestly should have reviewed every chapter as this story was lovely. It flowed beautifully and was enchantingly heartwarming and not overly serious. It was such a fun and engaging read so kudos to you for a job well done. 


punkish furball (Chapter 101) - Mon 04 Nov 2019

I loved this! It was fluffy and bite-sized like a marshmallow puff. Since you did ask for feedback, I will suggest combing multiple 100-word installments into a single chapter separated by heading. I think it would make it easier to upload a lot of chapters at once (I think you may have posted about 20-30 chapters today lol). It's just a suggestion and the only thing I could think of besides gushing how much I liked it.

Until next time, TCB!

~punkish furball


Buttercream (Chapter 101) - Mon 04 Nov 2019

You have done an amazing job with this story.   Sesshomaru was very clever on how to date a human.  He got to know and spend time with her.


hw (Chapter 101) - Mon 04 Nov 2019

I love this story so much because I can't help but smile at their interactions. Even Inuyasha is cute when he's reluctantly not getting in the way because Kags is so happy. This was the perfect fluffy and light balm I needed today, thanks!!


Nilee1 (Chapter 101) - Mon 04 Nov 2019

A truly adorable story. I absolutely want more. Great job????????????


Barredwindows (Chapter 101) - Mon 04 Nov 2019

This story was just adorable. And the fact that every time I refreshed this site there would be 10 more chapters waiting to be read really, really sweetened an already sweet deal. I was half expecting another woman to actually pop out from somewhere but was relieved to find the only drama in the story was the bandit. That chapter was hilarious. Eagerly awaiting the new stories you might come out with. 


Sessygurl (Chapter 101) - Mon 04 Nov 2019

Such a cute story. I like that he was honest with her in the end and let he know it was all for her. He never denied that it wasn't her though. Of course I wouldn't mind a sequel but another story would be good oo. I have enjoyed you writing and  I hope you do more in the future.


Goldie Fawn (Chapter 101) - Mon 04 Nov 2019

That was great! So cute, sweet and fun! I accidently read it all at once lol.


beachvilla (Chapter 101) - Mon 04 Nov 2019

Was a fun read. Good work!


Toni (Chapter 101) - Mon 04 Nov 2019

loved t really would like a sequel 

keep up the great work


Kuroisuna (Chapter 101) - Mon 04 Nov 2019

Oh, this story had me grinning the whole time! So cute and well written. 


Literary Fan (Chapter 101) - Mon 04 Nov 2019

I can't believe you updated. \(>?<)/ yaaaAaaass!

 

This was such a CUUUUUTE drabble series. I really enjoyed reading it.

That ending though. Hahaha. Practice makes perfect. (^_~)

Again thanks for posting. 


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