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Shastuhh (Chapter 16) - Wed 16 Sep 2020

Tank your time!! I also write and it takes time sometime life and work get in the way! Or school what have you! This was a great update thou! Ruanknyour foe the update 


Nicki (Chapter 16) - Thu 10 Sep 2020

Wow! I loved this chapter too!! Please update soon, this is such a good story! I can't wait to see what happens next!


SmilingFool (Chapter 16) - Wed 09 Sep 2020

Wow that was some chapter omg really had me on edge there....  leave it to Naraku to trick the mind let alone be so damnable evil that the jewel is always in play at least Sesshomaru is there for Kagome, wonder what will happen next.  update soon


Shastuhh (Chapter 15) - Sun 23 Aug 2020

This is a really good story I cant wait for the next update itnreally pulls you in and captures your attention I read it so fast. 


Carlyn (Chapter 15) - Wed 19 Aug 2020

This was an awesome chapter! I loved the suspense throughout the whole thing! And talk about a cliffhanger! I can't wait to read what you have coming next!!!


Carlyn (Chapter 14) - Wed 19 Aug 2020

Sorry, those ??????? in my last comment were actually meant to be the clapping emojis. Apparently dokuga hasn't updated that option yet. Lol


Carlyn (Chapter 14) - Wed 19 Aug 2020

I have to say, I'm not usually a fan of the simple present tense style of writing, and the switch from past to present style in this chapter threw me for a beat. But once I adjusted to the change I actually REALLY liked it for this particular stage in this story. It really helped to me to feel like I was there for the battle. I also think the switch makes this battle scene stand out more, emphasizing it's important role in the story. Again, I'm not usually a fan of this writing style in general. But used appropriately I think it can definitely enhance the writers story. This was very well done. ????????????


Carlyn (Chapter 13) - Wed 19 Aug 2020

Oooohhweeeee! That little private sesskag moment was HOT! 


Carlyn (Chapter 12) - Wed 19 Aug 2020

"the mental image of his miko kissing some stranger simply because a plant decreed it be done was absurd to the highest degree. If anyone was to partake in such a tradition with his miko it should be him…" Hahaha! I love this part. 


Carlyn (Chapter 11) - Wed 19 Aug 2020

Haha! I love it when Sesshomaru beats Koga up in a jealous fit. Frankly, they're my favorite fight pairing considering how reckless and yet persistent Koga is, combined with how jealous Sesshomaru is. Always makes for a great scene. 


Carlyn (Chapter 9) - Sun 16 Aug 2020

Kick his ass sess/kag!!! I always liked the idea of Hojo being a real p.o.s. Frankly, he always struck me as being a little 'off.' Like he's sweet, but in a superficial 'I'm secretly a psychopathic stalker' sort of way. Lolol


Carlyn (Chapter 8) - Sun 16 Aug 2020

Ahhh the cultural gap between human and youkai is a vast one indeed. Lol


Carlyn (Chapter 1) - Sat 15 Aug 2020

Hahaha!


Lauren (Chapter 15) - Mon 10 Aug 2020

Interesting end for Kikyo. Super annoyed Kagome still refuses to listen. I wonder if Inuyasha and the others were split up as well?


Lauren (Chapter 14) - Mon 10 Aug 2020

Loved your battle scene. I hope Kikyo does NOT end up stabbin Inuyasha in his back when they find/meet Naraku

DAISIE 


Melissa Fizz (Chapter 15) - Sun 09 Aug 2020

Awsome!!!!!!!!!

 


Nicki (Chapter 15) - Fri 07 Aug 2020

Wow amazing chapter! I love your writing and emotion I felt from reading it! So good!!! Please please please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens and if sesshomaru gets to her soon!


Mecca (Chapter 14) - Wed 29 Jul 2020

It's all good! I am just glad to see you're back! I hope you're doing better with everything that's been happening - don't put undo pressure on yourself, we're all gonna be here when you update again <3


Valasaurus (Chapter 14) - Mon 27 Jul 2020

So glad that you are continuing this story! I hope you and your loved ones are well.

this chapter was well worth the wait! I wonder what is happening in the abyss


Lauren (Chapter 14) - Sun 26 Jul 2020

Hey~ Haven't read the chapter yet (need to reread the last few chapters to refresh my memory), but welcome back, even if it's only for a short period. Hope you've been doing well and staying safe. 


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