This is an awesome premise, really loving it!
Anonymous (Chapter 5) - Wed 09 Oct 2019
So excited to read another chapter! I love the way you have Kags and Sess interact!
It's good to see Sesshomaru comfort Kagome. I love the bravery of Sango and Miroku both question Kagome while Sesshomaru was there with them.
Nile (Chapter 5) - Sun 06 Oct 2019
Nice... though shaking hands is with the right hand of both parties. Visualize and you'll see that you're shaking hands wrong from left hand to right hand.
In so happy you update, I was just rereading the story earlier, so it's a pleasant surprise .I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Keep up the great work!
I really enjoyed Shippo's and Sango's reactions. Shippo's scepticism was super cute. And Sango's anger was actually (more then)kinda relatable. Keep up the good work!!!!
I love this. I really love how every emotion that Sesshomaru reads off of Kagome is a different scent. It's amazing how you tie them so well. I'm looking forward to watching their courting and anticipate that there will be bumps along the way as they get to know one another. Oh the possibility of misunderstandings abounds!
Denisered252 (Chapter 4) - Mon 30 Sep 2019
Omg!!!! I'm so in love with this story!!!! I can't wait to read the rest. This is awesome! ????????????
Omg this is my new favorite story and I gobbled it up - can’t wait to read more!
Just read all that has been written so far and I love it. I like the story’s perspective. Looking forward to updates.
Brandie (Chapter 4) - Sun 22 Sep 2019
I just read your story and I really liked what I read so far and can't wait to read more please update soon.
I really like how your writing the relationship dynamic between Kagome and Inuyasha, and how stoic Sesshoumara is trying to be during all of it.
What a cliff hanger! What an emotional trip. I feel bad for them both. We all make mistakes and sometimes our best defense is denial.
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Sat 14 Sep 2019
This is a very interesting chapter. I was reading and the next thing I knew, it was at the end. You hit it on the head with the dialogue between them. I am looking forward to the next one.
Uuuuuu!!! I just found this story! And OH BOY!! What a story!! SO far it has been absolutely amazing!! I am loving every little part of it and I really look forward to your next update!! I have a strange feeling that this is going to be one of my favorite stories in here!! Thank you so much for writing and sharing with us!
This is really interesting, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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