And this is supposed to be set in tokyo? Fahrenheit and sun tans? its a good story but if the setting is in Tokyo why does it follow American culture..

Tho, there were few mistakes but it's  fine and didn't affect the story, the story was good and enjoyable, hope to see more from this story. Thank you!

Yes!, Yes!, Yes!!  I am liking this very much! Love the interactions and sexy descriptions and truly enjoy the thirst I feel at the end of each chapter for more! Please update soon again, this story has all the hallmarks of a great tale! 

Ahhh!! So glad to see you update this Amazing story!!!! Great writing keep it going your awesome???????? 

Was Kagome married before in this fan fiction? Mrs. are for married ladies and Ms. is for single ladies.

can't wait for more  and see kagomes response to his gift  please update soon

Hmm..interesting!

Sounds super promising ;D update soon!