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KShadeslady (Chapter 15) - Mon 03 Jun 2019

She has definitely found his button and she’s  pressing it hard. Great story. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter.  


KShadeslady (Chapter 13) - Sun 02 Jun 2019

Got to love that dragon! Charming chapter. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 11) - Sun 02 Jun 2019

Hmmm...I’m thinking that he is not prepared for dealing with Kagome. Men are simply not equipped for these battles  LOLOLOL and his mother knows this. He still has much to learn  

 


Anonymous (Chapter 15) - Sun 19 May 2019

Ah, so great, Interesting take, hope there's more story left in your noggin


KShadeslady (Chapter 7) - Thu 09 May 2019

Time to work for your dinner. I’m enjoying this fic. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 3) - Thu 09 May 2019

Oh...she sounds like she’s been keeping company with Inuyasha. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Thu 09 May 2019

LMAO! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 May 2019

Oh my...be careful what you ask for Kagome! LOL. Hopefully she’s smart. I can see his nose wrinkling in disgust. Heck! I think my nose was wrinkled at her description. 


Nilee1 (Chapter 14) - Mon 29 Apr 2019

This is a very sad, but insightful chapter. The truth of it resonates with anyone who has had to let go of an aging pet. I was moved to tears. You are an excellent writer.


Neelixonee (Chapter 14) - Mon 29 Apr 2019

Again, I gotta say how much I love this story and how you work with Sesshoumaru's thoughts and feelings.  Refreshing and heartbreaking.  It's expected that a being that lives for so long may be so, so much deeper.  Love it 


allicia (Chapter 13) - Mon 22 Apr 2019

For some reason im seing kagome as toothless lol


Nilee1 (Chapter 13) - Mon 22 Apr 2019

OMG! This was an absolutely great chapter. You have done a wonderful job of capturing the “nature” of all the characters. It’s very clear from Sesshomaru‘s pets that “mortality“ is a critical issue for him. He “loves” Ah-Un not only because the dragon is a gift from his father but because he is Yokai and has a similar life span to his. Sesshomaru‘s refusal to see Kagome as nothing more than a pet that will die too soon should cause mega problems for Sesshomar. Props to Ah-Un for putying TThe ice lord in his place:-)


Neelixonee (Chapter 13) - Mon 22 Apr 2019

Poor Sesshoumaru.  Kagome winning hearts again!


VS (Chapter 11) - Mon 15 Apr 2019

You are killing me!!!! XD Thank you so much for this snippets of joy! They always brighten my day! Inukimi is just the best, I look up to that hell of a mother! ;)

And I'm rolling around everytime you involve his dragon...lol. Sesshoumaru can be so hopeless sometimes! He likes the dragon but not the human slave...lol! :D

You are evil cutting the end like that. Would have liked to bear witness to his embarrassment! :P

I'm wondering who that opponent will be. ;)


Slayersgurl35 (Chapter 10) - Mon 08 Apr 2019

Its interesting 


Neelixonee (Chapter 9) - Mon 01 Apr 2019

Ok...I love this story.  The whole thing is written in such a tempered, weighted way, much like Sesshoumaru in your story.  The timing of the action, the context of each chapter, and the overall rythm is so complimentary.  The character you are developing in Sesshoumaru has a level of depth that isn't seen much.  You can practically feel the poise and precision of his actions and thoughts.  Add to this more personality.  The relationship with A-un is very seldom touched in stories, and this is a rare gem.  Jaken is always faithful if not annoying, the patience for him is incredible.  Rin is his ward, someone to value as something of a great personal responsibility.  Theses things are touched upon, but A-un?  Very seldom.  He's usually just a slightly glorified beast of burden with some cool defense moves and vaguely adorable.  But here, though still not completely tapped into, he is shown to be of great value and revered by a charachter known for coldness.  This attention to charachterization is beautiful.  Theres no rush, just good meaty work.

 

I'm very excited for the future of this story.  Thank you.


MollzJJ (Chapter 9) - Mon 01 Apr 2019

Uh Oh this can only mean Kagome has done something very stupid, very dangerous or very Impressive. Can’t wait for more. PS love Sess doting on baby Ah-Un!


Neelixonee (Chapter 8) - Sat 30 Mar 2019

What a sweet chapter!  She needed some light! 


nicole (Chapter 8) - Sat 30 Mar 2019

Awwww she made a friend


Sayuri (Chapter 7) - Thu 28 Mar 2019

I've only read 2 sentences and I already fell in love with the story! Now I can't wait to read more!!!! <3 <3 

You're doing a great job, hun! 


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