VS (Chapter 11) - Mon 15 Apr 2019

You are killing me!!!! XD Thank you so much for this snippets of joy! They always brighten my day! Inukimi is just the best, I look up to that hell of a mother! ;)

And I'm rolling around everytime you involve his dragon...lol. Sesshoumaru can be so hopeless sometimes! He likes the dragon but not the human slave...lol! :D

You are evil cutting the end like that. Would have liked to bear witness to his embarrassment! :P

I'm wondering who that opponent will be. ;)


Slayersgurl35 (Chapter 10) - Mon 08 Apr 2019

Its interesting 


Neelixonee (Chapter 9) - Mon 01 Apr 2019

Ok...I love this story.  The whole thing is written in such a tempered, weighted way, much like Sesshoumaru in your story.  The timing of the action, the context of each chapter, and the overall rythm is so complimentary.  The character you are developing in Sesshoumaru has a level of depth that isn't seen much.  You can practically feel the poise and precision of his actions and thoughts.  Add to this more personality.  The relationship with A-un is very seldom touched in stories, and this is a rare gem.  Jaken is always faithful if not annoying, the patience for him is incredible.  Rin is his ward, someone to value as something of a great personal responsibility.  Theses things are touched upon, but A-un?  Very seldom.  He's usually just a slightly glorified beast of burden with some cool defense moves and vaguely adorable.  But here, though still not completely tapped into, he is shown to be of great value and revered by a charachter known for coldness.  This attention to charachterization is beautiful.  Theres no rush, just good meaty work.

 

I'm very excited for the future of this story.  Thank you.


MollzJJ (Chapter 9) - Mon 01 Apr 2019

Uh Oh this can only mean Kagome has done something very stupid, very dangerous or very Impressive. Can’t wait for more. PS love Sess doting on baby Ah-Un!


Neelixonee (Chapter 8) - Sat 30 Mar 2019

What a sweet chapter!  She needed some light! 


nicole (Chapter 8) - Sat 30 Mar 2019

Awwww she made a friend


Sayuri (Chapter 7) - Thu 28 Mar 2019

I've only read 2 sentences and I already fell in love with the story! Now I can't wait to read more!!!! <3 <3 

You're doing a great job, hun! 


Neelixonee (Chapter 7) - Thu 28 Mar 2019

Love it!   I love her fire, and Sesshoumaru's almost easygoing nature, even if concealed by his outward image.


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 7) - Wed 27 Mar 2019

Lol this is definitely a very interesting Kagome and Sesshomaru story! 


Neelixonee (Chapter 6) - Mon 25 Mar 2019

Intriguing.! 


MollzJJ (Chapter 6) - Sun 24 Mar 2019

Love this story so far. I follow your other stories and I think you are so good at the banter between Kagome & Sess. Always smart, funny and on point. Interested to see where this story goes - can't wait to see what Kagome's work involves.


VS (Chapter 5) - Sat 23 Mar 2019

Hahaha, I can imagine Myoga just like that,  waving several of his hands at him an accusing him! "Shame on you"! Lol. Nobody ever dared to say that to the killing perfection, but that old flea did :D

I'm wondering whether Kagome is someone "special" and Myoga knows of it and is not allowed to tell Sesshoumaru?

I'm looking forward to your next update!


CookieAsylum (Chapter 4) - Wed 20 Mar 2019

No, Sesshoumaru, you butt! What a jerk, lol but it’s completely believeable.

I love how snarky and sharp-tongued Kagome is. It’s super refreshing. I’m curious if she’s still from the future and can’t get home, or if she’s from the current world and something happened that she can’t get home. Either way, I’m certainly looking forward to the next installment of this series. I adore your writing. It definitely sparks joy haha

Keep up the great work!


VS (Chapter 4) - Tue 19 Mar 2019

Wtf there are books on what to do when you come in possession of a human?! XD I love Kagome's mouth and with that a big compliment to you! You always find some witty remarks to involve in your stories!!! :)

I was under the impression that Kagome is a child or a young teenager, though you said that she is 18...seems I got it wrong at the beginning, hehe.

Her background story is really interesting and honestly I can imagine her quite well traveling with a bunch of thieves (gangsters) and living their lifestyle! :P

And that's why I'm sure that she will love to sleep in that cell, simply because it is sheltered. And considering where and how she had been sleeping before she will see that as a 5star hotel!!! XD And piss off Sesshoumaru even more! :P

I'm looking forward to your next update!


VS (Chapter 2) - Sun 17 Mar 2019

Oh kami help me, I can't stop laughing!!! XD Especially the first chapter was hilarious. I don't now what was more funny, Sesshmama's way (and I'm sure she enjoyed torturing Sesshoumaru), Sesshoumaru's disappointment that he didn't get a dragon or Kagome's behaviour? She was going to show him the finger??? :') And "bath me, ye jerk"??? I love it!!!

Someone is definitely going to lose a hand while performing the landscape...can't wait to read more!!!


CookieAsylum (Chapter 2) - Sun 17 Mar 2019

Oh man! I love this already! I love how gruff Kagome is. I’m definitely looking forward to future updates of this!


StormieLikeWeather (Chapter 2) - Sun 17 Mar 2019

Ahhhh goodness. It's very funny. It reminds me of Pygmalion, because she's so brash. (I mean that in a good way lol.) There's a point at the begining of Inuyasha where she bathes even though the river is cold, so that's a big difference, but it's funny so who cares. The idioms are a really nice touch. His mom makes me think of Liz Taylor, also a great thing. Looking forward to more! 


Neelixonee (Chapter 2) - Sun 17 Mar 2019

Landscape LMFAO!  Can't wait for more.  How refreshing!


Katrina Kee (Chapter 2) - Sun 17 Mar 2019

OMG Landscape!?!?!? Somebody is going to get scratched!!! Or perhaps have something purified/burnt lol!!! My bet is bathing attendants will get it first, followed by Sesshomar haha! Well at least the attempt will be made on both subjects by accident of course, since it seems that Kagome doesn’t have control over her powers yet.....I wonder what she was trying to take from Inukimi’s carriage? Food? A piece of silk cloth perhaps? Maybe Kagome was just in the wrong night lace at the wrong time? Well in any case, she is getting bathed, changed into clean clothing and will be fed at least. She could have been executed or put in the dungeon instead. Now she is Sesshomaru’s pet project/headache lol!!! I wonder if Inuyasha will mak a personal appearance in this fic. Kami help us all if he does! 


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