Wonderful update. So detailed. I like the back history filler about Kagome and Souta. Also love the mixed feelings she is going through.
Hnnn... Oh, Kagome, Kagome... What can I say? I hate a mousy, meek, defenseless Kagome, but this one is a bit feisty, she is obviously smart to have survived this long, but she needs to REALLY open her eyes and see that if she escapes, her situation will be a hundred times worst than what it used to be. Number one rule of survival? ADAPTATION. You adapt to your environment and from there observe and formulate a plan. She can't just think about running away without learning what tools are available to her beforehand. Where to go, how to get there, and how to continue to survive after that. Her current situation is not the best, but considering her past options it is a vast improvement. I wish she would show a bit more appretiation towards Sesshomaru, but I do understand why she is the way she is towards him and demons in general. But she also needs to realize, that not all demons are evil, just like not all humans are innocent. Balance girl! Find a point of balance and adapt!
Overall, a great chapter, and I love seeing Sesshomaru not being overbearing and disregarding her in all accounts. I like to not hate him if possible. ;)
Looking forward to your next chapter. Again, thank you for the time and effort in sharing your inspiration and talent with us!
Best wishes and until next time!
Koree (Chapter 10) - Thu 03 Oct 2019
Lol they are intrested yet not in each other but have the mating mark adding fuel to that already burning fire , yay Ayame & Kouga have made an appearance. Great chap
Damn. Damn. Damn. I already know that Naraku and the other lords are going to test her ever loving patience. Hang in there Kagome!
Shanika (Chapter 10) - Tue 01 Oct 2019
Aw hell.... just when I were seeing some progress... hell is now loose
What a wonderful chapter. It reminds me so much of tales of the fae. Something beautiful or terrifying and so, so far from human. I love it.
Oh man! There was so much in this chapter! What happened to Souta?! Clearly, Kagome has met Naraku in the past. And the shrine?! Was it secretly Kagome, unaware of her miko powers, that was keeping it safe? Or were demons just repelled by the holiness of it in general? I wonder if Kouga assumed Rin was Kagome’s by how she cares for her OR if Sess just didn’t explicitly explain. Lol but oh man! This was such a good update! I love that Kagome and Sess are having trouble fighting the mating, less so Sess. And while this is definitely not the best situation, I kinda hope Kagome can... team up with him against the other demons. Naraku! Go away!
I’m actually quite curious if the shikon is going to appear lol. I’m just speculating! I’m very much enjoying this ride and looking forward to all its twists and turns. Keep up the amazing work!
Lauren (Chapter 10) - Mon 30 Sep 2019
How did he make her hair grow back? That's so bizzare.
Good story
Koree (Chapter 9) - Mon 16 Sep 2019
Amazing chap I definitely thought Kagome was going to get her mark tested lol , ah we couldn’t go too long before Naraku came in to ruin things
Poor Rin. This world they live in is just horrifying. Even the thought of the purple tulip women breaks my heart. I have no clue how this ends but I hope the future isn’t so bleak.
This just keeps getting better. Wow! Very intense chapter.
Oh boy! Enter Naraku! Ugh! What a slime!
Great update! Amazing, just amazing! The chemistry between Kagome and Sesshomaru is so complicated, but at the same time so easily undestood. I love this story and always look forward to your updates. Thank you so much for sharing and please update soon again!
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