Reviews for Macaria by mythicamagic

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Jennifer (Chapter 6) - Tue 11 Jun 2019

Update soon!!!!


KShadeslady (Chapter 6) - Fri 07 Jun 2019

So sorry, that anonymous entry was mine. I needed to sign in again. Love this story. 


Anonymous (Chapter 6) - Fri 07 Jun 2019

Wow! That was quite interesting leadup to the ceremony! Caps! I’m wondering if Sesshomaru has other plans for Rin as time goes on. Naraku sounds as slimy as ever. Thanks for updating. 


Eve Nighte (Chapter 6) - Wed 05 Jun 2019

New favourite story!! Love, love, love it! :D

Loving the premise, the characters, the tension building (for the story and the romance) - it's very well written and all I wanna do is read more!

Thank you for updating, looknig forward to the next installment - hoping its sooner than later haha 

<3 


Neelixonee (Chapter 6) - Wed 05 Jun 2019

What a beautiful chapter.  I love the descriptions and her interactions with Sesshoumaru,. It reminds me of the Goblin Market and warms my heart.  I cannot wait!  Love this story so much!


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 6) - Tue 04 Jun 2019

Damn Kagome. Just can’t catch a break! I’m really enjoying Sesshomaru’s slightly playful side that’s being displayed as well as Rin’s childlike maturity. 


marisel (Chapter 6) - Tue 04 Jun 2019

That's a very different mating ceremony,  poor kagome. I think I would kill myself.   It is too crazy, .  Impressive,  can't wait for the next one,,.

Where is inuyasha? 


Orionda (Chapter 6) - Tue 04 Jun 2019

Oh my god what a place to leave a cliffhanger!
I've never read of such unique wedding in SessxKagome stories. It was a delight to read!
So looking forward to the next chapter! And dreadfully waiting what lies in store for poor Rin and Naraku! It's already making my skin crawl in a deliciously evil way... :D


Orotami (Chapter 6) - Tue 04 Jun 2019

Man! I cant wait for more! What a place to leave us at!


LovemeUsui (Chapter 6) - Tue 04 Jun 2019

Ahhhhh I want more!!


CookieAsylum (Chapter 6) - Tue 04 Jun 2019

omg omg omg yes! This update. We’re learning more, and about to start this conflicted relationship. Omg! I’m so excited. Sess probably realizes the place he’s in in relation to Kagome - “I’ll love our children, and you’re forcing me” statement last chapter. I’m so excited to see how this goes! And Naraku does not deserve Rin!

 

Omg... is he... are they... gonna do that... in canine form? >//////<


Blommie8 (Chapter 5) - Thu 16 May 2019

I really like all of your stories. And you always complete it. I like otome game!!! All of yours!!

 


hana sora (Chapter 5) - Wed 15 May 2019

this is a promising story so far so keep it coming


marisel (Chapter 5) - Mon 13 May 2019

So now she will be use as a baby machine.  Death to the yokai scum, I  tell you , show no mercy and she was rape  how is she going to cope with a force mating.  Ummmm


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 5) - Sun 12 May 2019

This story! I love the Interaction she had with Sesshomar. Really helped to reveal more of their character and motivations. a part of me wants to see if he become possessive/fatherly towards Rin like in the original storyline.


Neelixonee (Chapter 5) - Sun 12 May 2019

Also, I have just a quick catch on an error.  This one always sticks out to me and is a pet peeve of mine.  Usually, I can read through and let things slide, but I assume everyone who posts here is trying to develop their skills in writing and storytelling.  So this is just a commonly made mistake, swapping taut for taunt. 

 

Taunt:

1. A remark made in order to anger, wound, or provoke someone.
 
I think you meant:
 
 
Taut: adj.
 
1,  stretchedor pulled tight; not slack.

Neelixonee (Chapter 5) - Sun 12 May 2019

Aaah!  So happy for an update!  Kagome definitely has a lot to deal with.  She seems to be taking it in stride though.  Sesshoumaru, devious Mastermind!


Gee (Chapter 5) - Sat 11 May 2019

It's getting more exciting! Thanks for the new chapter! Well written as always~


CookieAsylum (Chapter 5) - Sat 11 May 2019

Oh man! I love where you’re going with this fic. Is Sesshoumaru scheming to usurp power from the other lords?! Will Kagome ever escape? I’m glad she’s keeping Rin. I’ve been looking forward to this update the whole time!!

 

Keep up the awesome work!!!


LovemeUsui (Chapter 5) - Sat 11 May 2019

Oh man I've been waiting for an update from you. I can't wait for more!


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