Reviews for Macaria by mythicamagic

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PoisonIvy (Chapter 11) - Fri 13 Dec 2019

Keep writing!!!! I Love it!!

Koree (Chapter 11) - Thu 05 Dec 2019

Oooo Naraku has something to do with Souta's death -.- i knew it 

CookieAsylum (Chapter 11) - Mon 25 Nov 2019


I have been looking forward to this update since you posted the previous chapter. Naraku! You bastard!!! That scheming SOB!! I love how vile and conniving he is in this story. And we learn that Sesshoumaru led the main assault on the humans. And poor Kagome! She's so conflicted! Trying to put on a brave face, but also being surrounded by the tulip women and seeing what they're going through!! Knowing that she hid while Naraku and his minions did away with Souta! Ugh! My heart! And we got to meet Sango! My gut kinda guessed that she'd be in the Purple Tulip, but reading her introduction and how she and Miroku are still trying to be together despite the odds is sooooooo great! Wonderful job! Ah! I loved it!

Not gonna lie - that emotionally conflicted smut was also *chef's kiss*!! Loved it!

We see a softer side of Sesshoumaru at the end. (I like how enamored he is with her. He's taking this mate thing very seriously; but when isn't he serious? lol)

ugh! I loved all of this! Keep up the amazing work! Honestly, this update just made my day and I needed time to process before I could write a review! But I loved it. 12/10, will DEFINITELY read again! <3

Fye (Chapter 11) - Mon 25 Nov 2019

Such an intense chapter, gosh. Poor Kagome having to endure the Purple Tulip women servicing her -and the demons- and realizing she's in a much better situation than the rest of them... that shock and painful realization must not be easy to recover from.

That Naraku ass, on the other hand... I'm still wondering what he intends once he reveals Kagome is a priestess. Does he want her dead? Does he want her for himself? Is he expecting, like Sesshomaru, that she'll be able to breed full youkai babies? (although he is a hanyou, so it wouldn't really work for him). I was also glad you introduced to the band of seven! Are they working for Naraku?

And Sesshomaru trying to confort Kagome at the end by transforming into his real form was so cute! And I'm guesing he was also kind of looking for comfort himself after the whole Inuyasha story. Can't wait to find out more about what happened.

Oh, and I'm really glad Miroku and Sango are a couple, though their circumstances... Poor Sango having to work at the purple tulip... and poor Miroku having to witness her working :(


Thanks for the update :D

Mecca (Chapter 11) - Sun 24 Nov 2019

Wonderful, another awesome chapter! Love how their relationship is slowly developing, as they learn more about each other. Her reaction to some hussy touching him from under the table was too good - although I am wondering had she not interfered, would Sess have let himself be touched? I guess she didn't give him any time to react lol :) I'm glad to see that Kagome is letting herself be seduced instead of fighting the mate mark. It's gonna be crazy once Kagome gets knocked up - if she does. Thank you for updating! I hope you're well and life is going smoothly for you! Looking forward to reading more of your beautiful writing. 

Koi (Chapter 11) - Sun 24 Nov 2019

Whoa such an emotionally intense chapter! I felt all of the emotions of Kagome! You have such a beautiful talent with you writing! I wanted to stab Naraku so badly!! i felt the hurt of Kagome "failure" to protect her sibling, all of it! I can't wait until your next update, I am dying to know of what will happen next! 

Gee (Chapter 11) - Sat 23 Nov 2019

Is it too much to ask if another chapter is on the way? Haha

I loved this chapter & can't wait for the next! 

LovemeUsui (Chapter 11) - Sat 23 Nov 2019

What a chapter! BRAVO!!!

Neelixonee (Chapter 11) - Sat 23 Nov 2019

What a great chapter.  The ordeal of that dinner had me anxious, and the lemon was delightful.  But I must say the fluff at the end was my favorite. 

Arc-an Angel (Chapter 11) - Sat 23 Nov 2019

Damn that Naraku! And poor Sango. Though I am happy to see how Sesshomaru & Kagome interact with one another. Even if on instinct or reaction. He's not so heartless or mindless in cruelty. And the sex scenes are HOT!

Koi (Chapter 10) - Fri 11 Oct 2019

Wow! What a turn of events! Can't wait until the next chapter of how Kagome keeps herself from purifying Naraku ass!

KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Sun 06 Oct 2019

Wonderful update. So detailed. I like the back history filler about Kagome and Souta. Also love the mixed feelings she is going through. 


Midnight Cat (Chapter 10) - Fri 04 Oct 2019

Hnnn... Oh, Kagome, Kagome... What can I say? I hate a mousy, meek, defenseless Kagome, but this one is a bit feisty, she is obviously smart to have survived this long, but she needs to REALLY open her eyes and see that if she escapes, her situation will be a hundred times worst than what it used to be. Number one rule of survival? ADAPTATION. You adapt to your environment and from there observe and formulate a plan. She can't just think about running away without learning what tools are available to her beforehand. Where to go, how to get there, and how to continue to survive after that. Her current situation is not the best, but considering her past options it is a vast improvement. I wish she would show a bit more appretiation towards Sesshomaru, but I do understand why she is the way she is towards him and demons in general. But she also needs to realize, that not all demons are evil, just like not all humans are innocent. Balance girl! Find a point of balance and adapt!

Overall, a great chapter, and I love seeing Sesshomaru not being overbearing and disregarding her in all accounts. I like to not hate him if possible. ;)

Looking forward to your next chapter. Again, thank you for the time and effort in sharing your inspiration and talent with us!

Best wishes and until next time!

Koree (Chapter 10) - Thu 03 Oct 2019

Lol they are intrested yet not in each other but have the mating mark adding fuel to that already burning fire , yay Ayame & Kouga have made an appearance. Great chap 

Arc-an Angel (Chapter 10) - Wed 02 Oct 2019

Damn. Damn. Damn. I already know that Naraku and the other lords are going to test her ever loving patience. Hang in there Kagome!

Shanika (Chapter 10) - Tue 01 Oct 2019

Aw hell.... just when I were seeing some progress... hell is now loose

Neelixonee (Chapter 10) - Tue 01 Oct 2019

What a wonderful chapter.  It reminds me so much of tales of the fae.  Something beautiful or terrifying and so, so far from human. I love it. 

CookieAsylum (Chapter 10) - Tue 01 Oct 2019

Oh man! There was so much in this chapter! What happened to Souta?! Clearly, Kagome has met Naraku in the past. And the shrine?! Was it secretly Kagome, unaware of her miko powers, that was keeping it safe? Or were demons just repelled by the holiness of it in general? I wonder if Kouga assumed Rin was Kagome’s by how she cares for her OR if Sess just didn’t explicitly explain. Lol but oh man! This was such a good update! I love that Kagome and Sess are having trouble fighting the mating, less so Sess. And while this is definitely not the best situation, I kinda hope Kagome can... team up with him against the other demons. Naraku! Go away! 

I’m actually quite curious if the shikon is going to appear lol. I’m just speculating! I’m very much enjoying this ride and looking forward to all its twists and turns. Keep up the amazing work!

Lauren (Chapter 10) - Mon 30 Sep 2019

How did he make her hair grow back? That's so bizzare. 

KyraTekak (Chapter 9) - Tue 24 Sep 2019

Good story

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