Reviews for Macaria by mythicamagic

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Blommie8 (Chapter 5) - Thu 16 May 2019

I really like all of your stories. And you always complete it. I like otome game!!! All of yours!!

 


hana sora (Chapter 5) - Wed 15 May 2019

this is a promising story so far so keep it coming


marisel (Chapter 5) - Mon 13 May 2019

So now she will be use as a baby machine.  Death to the yokai scum, I  tell you , show no mercy and she was rape  how is she going to cope with a force mating.  Ummmm


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 5) - Sun 12 May 2019

This story! I love the Interaction she had with Sesshomar. Really helped to reveal more of their character and motivations. a part of me wants to see if he become possessive/fatherly towards Rin like in the original storyline.


Neelixonee (Chapter 5) - Sun 12 May 2019

Also, I have just a quick catch on an error.  This one always sticks out to me and is a pet peeve of mine.  Usually, I can read through and let things slide, but I assume everyone who posts here is trying to develop their skills in writing and storytelling.  So this is just a commonly made mistake, swapping taut for taunt. 

 

Taunt:

1. A remark made in order to anger, wound, or provoke someone.
 
I think you meant:
 
 
Taut: adj.
 
1,  stretchedor pulled tight; not slack.

Neelixonee (Chapter 5) - Sun 12 May 2019

Aaah!  So happy for an update!  Kagome definitely has a lot to deal with.  She seems to be taking it in stride though.  Sesshoumaru, devious Mastermind!


Gee (Chapter 5) - Sat 11 May 2019

It's getting more exciting! Thanks for the new chapter! Well written as always~


CookieAsylum (Chapter 5) - Sat 11 May 2019

Oh man! I love where you’re going with this fic. Is Sesshoumaru scheming to usurp power from the other lords?! Will Kagome ever escape? I’m glad she’s keeping Rin. I’ve been looking forward to this update the whole time!!

 

Keep up the awesome work!!!


Quvonda (Chapter 5) - Sat 11 May 2019

Oh man I've been waiting for an update from you. I can't wait for more!


Orotami (Chapter 5) - Sat 11 May 2019

I really enjoy this story. I'm in love with the plot so far and its written beautifully! I'm excited for the next chapters!


Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Mon 29 Apr 2019

Oh boy now what she's going to do?  Very difficult to escape that situation.  Been force into a hooking whether you name it ming or Blu flower house.  Not to much hope!  Ne


Prava (Chapter 4) - Thu 25 Apr 2019

This is such a different fic than what I read before. I was dreading to read it because I usually only read completed ones. But I also don’t do curiosity well and now I am hooked. I look forward to the future updates! 


Quvonda (Chapter 4) - Thu 25 Apr 2019

What a story. Can't wait for.more!


Neelixonee (Chapter 4) - Thu 25 Apr 2019

Oh boy!  What a mess she has gotten into.  I look forward to what happens. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 4) - Wed 24 Apr 2019

Wow! What a chapter! How awful for them! You perfectly captured how humilisting that would be. I was so angry for them. That chapter was heart wrenching. Well done!


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 4) - Wed 24 Apr 2019

Damn. It’s sickening how they’re going about things but it doesn’t feel too off from what women face now a days with health etc... I’m really invested in this story. 


Miss C (Chapter 4) - Wed 24 Apr 2019

Still cringe with sexual assault scenes, but still a great story.


Gee (Chapter 4) - Wed 24 Apr 2019

Love the story! 

 

Thanks for the update! 


Orionda (Chapter 3) - Wed 17 Apr 2019

I'm loving the story so far, such a sucer for dark themes I am!
Normally I'm not a fan of modern day Inuyasha AUs, but this really has captivated me in a way no other has.

The chapter length is great! I really like it that you have more to read in one chapter than having multiple shorter chapters in a story. I also appreciate all the little details you've taken into consideration, like Kagome cutting her and Rin's hair, avoiding bathing and time outside during periods and such. It makes the story feel real and allows you to relate with the characters more.

With only 3 chapters out, it's hard to say what to expect next, but it seems like there's still much to discover, about the Tokyo, the history between youkai and mankind, Kagome's past and so much more. I can hardly wait for continuation for this! Instant favorite!


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 3) - Sat 13 Apr 2019

This story is just....wow. So well written and unique. I can’t wait to read more!


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