Reviews for Riders on the Storm by Jamie

VS (Chapter 11) - Sun 17 Feb 2019

Sesshoumaru bent in sooner than expected??? Are you kidding me! :D

Kagome can be so oblivious sometimes! She really let herself get distracted by that kitsune info...well, let's see if she will be able to use her Rider's powers. And I can't wait to read finally about the first confrontation between Kagome and Sesshoumaru! :P


VS (Chapter 10) - Wed 06 Feb 2019

He's giving in...8 weeks... :') Nice one! Let's see how long Kagome will allow them to push her around like that. Maybe she will have mastered krav maga until then and will be able to kick some butts when she explodes! :P

I'm looking forward to your next update!


FayeMegan (Chapter 9) - Thu 24 Jan 2019

Kind of a rough start, but I was able to catch on to the plot. Seem interesting, I'd like to read more and see where it goes!


VS (Chapter 8) - Wed 23 Jan 2019

YES!YES!YES! InuPapa was in this chapter. And I LOVE Inupapa! <3 :D

Stubborn dogs indeed - one in particular! ;) Even the gods are pissed. And I'm just laughing like mad here. What a surprise it will be that his mate is NOT a demoness! :P SO looking forward to that chapter. I think your explanation of what a Soul Rider is was understandable! And I don't think that your story is progressing "too slow". So don't worry about that.

I'm looking forward to your next update!


VS (Chapter 7) - Sun 13 Jan 2019

Haha, seems like Kagome has some prejudices. Kitsune are not allowed to have a cold and indifferent expression? :P

There have been quite a few new names in this chapter...hope I will be able to remember them!

Sly Kagome. She can handle that bunch of military males quite well. Though I had to rech with all that sexism too. Can't blame Kagome for her tactics!

I'm looking forward to your next update.


VS (Chapter 6) - Sun 13 Jan 2019

I just love how Sesshoumaru is being extra stubborn! :D Even the gods can't handle him. Though Amaterasu is the best, flicking his nose! Haha, nice one!

I'm sorry for Mama Higurashi. So the "real" child had died in a car accident and the soul rider is taking his place now. That chapter cleared up some of the questions I had.

Thanks!


VS (Chapter 5) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

Boom! The moon god knows exactly what buttons he has to push! Was the story about the mark of the moon a joke, or is it really the reason why Sesshoumaru has it? Because my question would be then: why does SessMama have it to?

I'm looking forward to your next update!


VS (Chapter 4) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

Hahaha, this chapter was just too funny. Well Sesshoumaru, seems that someone is stronger than you! :P And it was only a touch with the tip of a finger! :') Jaken reactions though... :)

You know when that god mention that Sesshoumaru's soul will stay in that realm until he accepted his destiny, I was like "Oh, boy! It's over. You might as well bury the body, 'cause that stubborn dog will never agree willingly to anything!" 

Nice chapter!


VS (Chapter 3) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

So the well is sealed now. At least for everybody but those four. Does that mean now, that the story will progress in modern times?

I understand the need to explain Aya's existence. But I do feel SO sorry for Mama Higurashi...that poor women thinks that she had been raped... :( Maybe Kagome will find an appropriate punishment for her soul rider? ;) ;)

Off to the next chapter.


Nile (Chapter 4) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

Pretty cool. BTW... it's Tsukuyomi, not Tsukiyomi. 


VS (Chapter 2) - Fri 11 Jan 2019

Aaah, almost missed the second chapter!!! So Inuyasha is like that in your story? Well, then I'm glad the he was holding Kiyou's hand! ;) :P Also I loved Miroku's reaction...go Miroku go!

As you probably know I'm a big fan of Shippou and love to see him in a mother-son relationship with Kagome. So I'm super happy that he is calling her mom! :) And Rin's way of talking was just sweet!

I'm looking forward to your next update!


VS (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Jan 2019

OMG I didn't know you were writing!!! A nice surprise! :)

I find your concept to be really interesting. Especially that you write in the POV of an OC. That is rather unusual and I'm looking forward to that reading experience! Well, I don't need 3 guesses to tell who that bastard is going to be! :P

Though I will probably reread the first chapter when you will update the second one. Just to be sure that I understood your idea correctly!

I'm looking forward to your next update!

P.S. Don't change your writing style! Swearing seems to suit both of your OC's quite well! ;)


Toni (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Jan 2019

love your story  looking forward to many more chapters 

please keep writing it


Nallely (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Jan 2019

The plot is really interesting and I like your writing style, I'm going to continue reading your story so please keep going.


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