Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Tue 04 Dec 2018

I found this story to be intriguing.  I hope you do continue it and not abandon it.

You mentioned in SPOV that he had been struggling with the idea of getting rid of Kagome for years...how many years?  I ask this because none of the main characters seem to have matured in some kind of way.  I feel that Kagome should have matured more physically in that timeframe and also emotionally she should have outgrown that 15 year old school girl crush on an emotionally stunted Inuyasha. Sesshomaru???  smh.  This is just my perception.  :|

However, I think your writing skills are very good.  Keep up the good work!

Looking forward to reading further updates.

Cheers!!!


James1996 (Chapter 3) - Mon 03 Dec 2018

Great so far, I look forward to reading more in the future.


Cheyanna (Chapter 3) - Sun 02 Dec 2018

Interesting. I look forward to more!:) 


Tessitura (Chapter 3) - Sun 02 Dec 2018

this looks intereting, hope to see more soon!


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