Hello,
this story is freaking adorable!!! It has been a while since I read a fic where they were kids...I kind of forgot how much I enjoyed them! So, thank you!!!
Sesshoumaru is such a grumpy but he has a big heart. You had me squealing when he sent a private message to Kagome, how sweeet! The Tessaiga and the half-brother issue was unexpected. I'm curious to see what you will do with it though I hope you will continue to focus on the two kids.
The relationship between the three sisters is just beautiful! They would die for each other. Your characterisation of Kagome is relly nice. She is quite wise for her age and tries to help her sisters were she can but she is still a mischievous little girl. I'm glad you decided to give her both sides and not just the I-know-my-destiny- part.
Your OC's are hilarious and I'm glad that you are involving them into the plot and are not using them just as fillers.
This is a story I will definitely follow.
I'm looking forward to your next update!
Hi love the story, the plot is new and I can't wait to see where it goes. Anyways just wanted to point out a misstake most authors make when referring to youkai.
Youkai (Yoki) is as it is as the word sheep you don't add an 's to the end its just wrong same thing for the word youkai.
There is no such word as Youkai's.... Just thought you should know.
Thanks again for a writing a wonderful story.
Update soon.
Nice beginning.
LOL...yeah a few grammar and spelling errors but I'm no 'grammar nazi'. :)
I think I am going to love this story,
How old are my fav couple in this chapter?
So looking forward to more chapters to come.
I hope you continue and do not abandon it.
Great job and welcome back!!!
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